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Happy holidays!
I don't know if it's clear enough, but Goku's not the one shouting in the first panel, Gohan is.
And no need to point out how the 2nd panel looks a bit funny, awkward or whatever; I know (and I don't care ^^).
I've already drawn the next page, so I should upload it sometime next week.
Thanks for reading! ^^
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Since Gohan screams Mister Piccolo, how about adding Gohan's face in the speech thingy just like in the original manga?
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I'm aware that panel is a bit confusing
But if I start going back and fixing my earlier pages, I'm never going to finish this fanmanga x)
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Uhhh MISTER PICCOLO really made me laugh XD LOL anyways... the story keeps getting better!
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You are so good when it comes to fighting scenes!!!
That's something I really love on here.!
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I'm not that good xD
But I hope to get better
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=O Nappa lives! lolz I just had an arguement with myself reading this and remembering the last page lolz
Kairi: D= oh poor piccolo *glares at Liana*
What? o.o;;; I couldn't help saying that stuff about piccolo's death would mean hello ginyu force in the last page, how was I suppose to know Nappa would hear me and still go after piccolo ^^'''?
Kairi: -.-'''' *sigh* You and your big mouth
Thank you XD LOLZ
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Yeah, Nappa lives; it's been a while we've seen him but he's still there ^^
OOOOH So it was YOUR fault all along!!! xD
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*innocent look* No it wasn't :3
: -.-# Makankosappo!~ *fires*
*dies*
Kairi: Freedom
*sits up* Ghost~
Kairi: awww there goes my freedom
(You can tell a story with these lol)
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I actually don't think that the 2nd panel looks funny, awkward or whatever. To me it seemed pretty clear that it was someone else shouting and the 'Mister' part made it clear that it was Gohan.
Might Piccolo still die..?
Great work.
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The 2nd panel's problem is more a perspective problem, it just... looks off. But I'm happy enough with it ^^ I'll do better next time.
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Je viens de découvrir ton Fan Manga 
Sinon tu adore Trunks ou tu t'es juste dit que ça ferait une bonne histoire ?
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Merci! ^^
Pour mon rythme de parution, c'est plutôt aléatoire en ce moment, mais j'essaie de publier une page par quinzaine.
Les jeux vidéo restent effectivement mon passe temps préféré, même si j'ai plus vraiment le temps de jouer.
Non, je n'adore pas Trunks ^^ C'est un perso sympa. Mais c'est plus l'histoire en elle même qui m'intéresse.
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Y aurait-il moyen d'avoir ton histoire en Roman (enfin ce que tu as ecrit) ?
Sinon bonne chance pour la suite les dessins sont vraiment super .
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Ce que j'ai écrit, c'est une pile de notes absolument pas présentables
Merci! ^^
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ah sympa l'idée combat double, c'est vrais que dans dbz il font un peu, un combat a la fois et les autres il regarde pépère
c'est plus ce cas la qui devrais se passer, nappa montre qu'il ne fait pas que de la figuration 
je me suis toujours demander se qui serait arriver si raditz et nappa avais changer de camps comme vegeta, a mon avis l'histoire aurai été compliquer a géré avec autant de personnage en même temps 
ou faire la team goku (z-team sans vegeta)et la vegeta team (vegeta, raditz et nappa) vs les autres
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C'est pas vraiment un "combat double", enfin bon tu verras
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oui en fait j’aurai du dire 2 combat
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"You'll eventually get a voice that'll drive you crazy aswell."
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As in being punched by surprise? Not really
It should be clear why he got punched in the next page (:
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nappa is tricky so perhaps it was a sucker punch. he could have told piccolo to turn around and bothered him until he did like he does to vegeta.
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Are we talking about canon Nappa, or Abridged Nappa?
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Why would you think that?
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because he might get angry of nappa
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