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Goku! Behind you!!!!
Sorry, I just got into this comic, but I -had- to comment on this one! I feel myself getting excited!Β
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I stumbled onto this because I was reading the "About Me Meme" from longlovevegeta Β and he talked about "Wrong Time" so naturally I had to come check it out. ^.~ So far, so good!Β <3Β I think it may be time to stalk to you too. Β Β
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I love that last panel!
But this page appears very small on my monitor
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Oops, I had chosen the wrong display option. It should be fixed, now.
Thank you for letting me know!
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Oh, I missed a few pages. But I really wanted to comment on this one because I absolutely love the 3rd panel. The pose and the look he has. It just screams Vejita all over XD. Also you're getting better on Goku. I can see some improvement on his anatomy here. Excellent work
Is the mistake the 'kame' sign on Goku's back which should actually be Kaiou's sign?
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I like that panel too
Yeah, I'll get better at drawing Goku with time and practice ^^
Yes, that's the mistake! I keep forgetting to fix it, though!
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As awesome as always
You draw the Dragonball character so well and you have a great eye for the DBZ style as well!
The backgrounds are nifty and always well in proportion to the characters and the way you drew Vegeta appearing behind Goku was fantastic!!
Keep up the amazing work
The world loves you for your work
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Umm... Goku? You might want to look out for tha-
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Oh yay! I can't wait to see the rest of this!
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Very nice, especially like how you managed to pull off Vegeta showing up to attack Goku while zanzokenning.
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Zanzo-what?
*looks it up*
Oh, nice; I learned a new word today!
Thank you! ^^
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Lol, Vegeta is about to kick Goku's ass he didn't notice it yet, please Trunks just knock your father out, say what he want to say and leave rsrs. Nice page, I'm loving your fanfic.
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That would be boring though, wouldn't it? ^^
Thank you!
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Ops,where is written:
say what he want to say
Read:
*say what YOU want to say*
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Wonderful! Can't wait the next page *__*
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Man, your comics look so awesome! I get excited every time. XD
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haha i hope vegeta gives kakkarot a good whip in that last panel on the next page 
keep up the good work bro
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Juste excellent !!!
C'est une beautΓ© ce fanmanga !!
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Merci beaucoup goten! ^^
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Now to wait for next page :3 *camps again with cheese wheel*
My deep inner thoughts:
Ummm Goku O-O;;;; Hey Goku......*points behind him*
: huh? What?
: Vegeta.
: wha- *gets hit* X-X
*slaps my forehead with my palm* Curse my brother spamming me with annoying orange videos @-@
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Gimme some of that cheese OvO
Oh no not the annoying orange! Dx
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*hands about 25% of cheese wheel* here ya go :3 (and yeah...my little brother always shows me every annoying orange video he can find @-@;;; )
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Lulz, Trunks.
I love how he's still thinking in his head and acting cool XD
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He is acting cool coz he is, personally, out of danger ^^
Thanks for commenting!
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Another wonderful page for this amazing story. I think I said it before, but this is great and original, and actually it could be Bulma's fault here, but the time machine wasn't really finished when Trunks did that time-travel.
Omg, Goku <.< Vegeta's behind you!! XD
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Thank you very much!
It is Bulma's fault originally, but Trunks has been taking decisions of his own for a while now
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That's true x'D Trunks you silly x'D
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There is no more!... yet. ^^
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Um, Goku... *points behind him* Just trying to help, is all.
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Finall Son-Goku get's a second to talk to him and then Vegeta is about to interrupt it again XD
Nice page, but it looks like Trunks' sword dissapeared.
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Thanks!
You're probably referring to the 5th panel; I didn't draw it because the only thing that would have showed is its handle, which would have showed as a black bar. Bo-ring. xD
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awesome. come on trunks everyone wants too see you embarrass your dad. great page its at the dragonball multiverse standards and above their specials
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Ah, Multiverse... Art-wise, it's very good, but story-wise... not so much.
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i think the story is alright but that's because they haven't gotten to a plot just yet except for the tournament itself. but most if not all their specials suck.
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I read mangas for their story, and a tournament isn't a story in my book. I did try to read it though, because the drawings looked so good, but man, I couldn't make it past the 3rd chapter
And they haven't gotten to a plot just yet in how many pages? 400?!
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well i like the whole thing going on. in dbz filler they had a tournament for no reason when it never happened. their was no story for that just a tournament in the after life. they sorta have a plot going and its actually been 482 pages until tomorrow. i think the only thing to avoid is specials.
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I never watched that part of DBZ ^^
But I totally understand that people like Multiverse
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thats alright but they just got the super namek who fused with his whole tribe to fight. he fights a powered up cell jr but the fact is he esily crushed freeza, killed cell (form unknown), and killed majin buu (form unknown). excited to see a badass namek back in action since piccolo lost his credibility after the cell saga. also bracket 2 is almost over.
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