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Fernsway [2011-07-18 00:28:18 +0000 UTC]

thats so cool!!

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polarbear1234 [2011-07-10 14:15:23 +0000 UTC]

THIS IS EPIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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TilyerWolf [2011-07-10 10:16:41 +0000 UTC]

O.o woooaaaahhh, ok critiqu tiime, i would have if i hjad a premium but ok lets go.

I think its really original how you made her look and the way its all put together.
my favorite part to this is the way the blue flmae thingys (i hope there flames) are overlapping and make diffreent layers almost like an illusion from afar. Its hard to find somethig to improve but i guess one thing you can do would be to make the whole picture including paws, yoiu have a sense of wonder as to where her paws ar and what they are on but that dosnt really matter too much since its still freacking epic.

Overal cant really say its bad so well done cos its brilliant

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Aimlesswaves [2011-07-10 03:18:47 +0000 UTC]

Okay, so I wrote a whole page critique, and then accidentally erased it all! >.<

I will try to summarize all of my points as well as I did....

The perspective is odd, as it's ant's eye view rather than a straight on perspective. This contributes to the overall feel, but severely limits the tail and paws, both of which are extremely expressive. The paws could also have claws, which I feel would help the whole feel.

The fur is a little too smooth in some areas such as the arms. Perhaps you could slowly degrade it until it is flush. Not a problem in the face, as that is typically how it is drawn.

Forgoing the other eye was a stylistic choice, I understand, but I feel more expression could be conveyed by adding the other one. There is also a single line eye-brow, which is kind of cheating.

The mouth and nose are good and correct, but rather small. Compare them to the whiskers to see what I mean.

While it is a special cat, cell shading is less advised than normal soft shading due to the heavy presence of lighting since the cat is bathed in flame. Especially since it is a fluffy cat. (The special markings are cell-shaded)

I wonder what the eye would look like if it was truly like a cat's eye? Just a thought.

Very good all in all, though, continue the good work.

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KylieKattu [2011-07-10 02:58:03 +0000 UTC]

You made it just in time~ XD

Awesome job!
Thanks for entering~ :'D

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blazingwolf-fang [2011-07-10 02:54:03 +0000 UTC]

HOLY CRAP! THAT AMAZING!

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Werewulf-Dream [2011-07-10 02:23:54 +0000 UTC]

FFFFFFFFFFFFFFffudge xD THIS IS SO AWESOME I COULD DIEEEEEEEEEEEEEE *dies* I don't do critiques C:

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