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ShadowhawkOne — Sablefall part 2

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Sable felt the trigger creep near its breaking point, the barrel of her pistol less than a foot from the man’s head. She had caught up with him less than two miles from the bank he had robbed and shot a female teller. It had been three months since she had started tearing through the criminals of Dream Haven like a sickle through wheat stalks, leaving many of them with lasting physical injuries. However this one… This one she would make an example of to leave a far more lasting impression for the criminals of Dream Haven.

The blur of white and crimson came as a shock to her as her pistol was pulled from her hand. Looking up Sable saw the familiar eagle crest on the costumed chest of her friend and fellow heroine Cracovia. Her shock faded quickly leaving her feeling irritated as she watched the Blonde Bombshell easily apply a head lock on the criminal preventing his escape.

“I had things under control Cracovia. He wasn’t going to escape.”

Cracovia’s expression was hard as she spoke into the ear of the robber. “I heard what you did at the bank. Give me an excuse – any excuse – and I'll break every bone in your body.” Turning towards Sable her expression softened.

“We heard the stories, Sable, but we didn’t want to believe them. We came to help you, kochana[ko-HHAN-a - darling]. Time to give up this vendetta.”

Crossing her arms, she glared back up at her friend. “This isn’t a vendetta… I am teaching these criminals they won’t get away with anything anymore.”

A softer voice spoke behind her. “Your team mates are worried about you.”

Sable spun around quickly to find herself face to face with the concerned face of Felicity 'Fuchsia Fury' Flowers.

“We're worried about you too Sable.” Fuchsia said quietly.

“Fliss?” Sable said as her voice wavered slightly as she bit her lower lip. Both heroines watched as Sable seemed to sag under an enormous invisible weight.

“You didn’t give yourself any time… “ Fuchsia Fury began before she was interrupted by the criminal in her Polish friend's grip.

“Awww… Is the wittle heroine going to crgghhh…. “His words were cut off as he suddenly found it impossible to breathe as Cracovia flexed her arm muscles.

“Want to eat through a straw for the next few months, draniu?” Cracovia hissed in his ear.

Holding open her arms to hug her friend Fuchsia Fury stepped closer and spoke barely above a whisper. “I know you're hurting Samantha. But you have to give up this...crusade or rampage or...I don't know what it is. But I do know that...whatever it is..' The slim, brown-haired heroine shook her head. 'it won’t bring Ellen back.”

Fuchsia could see her words had hit home and watched as the tears quickly filled Sable’s eyes and spilled over her mask and down her cheeks. Sable rushed into her arms and wrapped her own arms around her waist and dropped her head on her shoulder and began to cry.

“They took her from me Fliss… I want her back. I miss her so much.”

As Fuchsia Fury comforted her friend, another pair of eyes watched the exchange through a high powered camera lens. Letting out a sigh they turned away from the screen and dialed a number on their phone. The line picked up after two rings. “There is a problem. Sable was about to cross the line, but she was stopped by Cracovia and Fuchsia Fury.”

There was a period of silence on the line, “They just ruined three months’ worth of work.” They heard the person on the other end exhale in frustration. “Return to the compound, it is time to start phase two.”

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Thanks go out to Cracoviia for her assistance with the Polish Bombshells speech inflections and helpful dialogue suggestions as well as the use of her stunning Characters Cracovia and Felicity 'Fuchsia Fury' Flowers.  Please ask her before using them.

Blonde Sable is my OC and can only be used with my permission.

This story takes place in the universe.

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Comments: 36

LordLard [2019-10-13 15:35:08 +0000 UTC]

That Ola's a nasty bully sometimes!

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ShadowhawkOne In reply to LordLard [2019-10-13 17:10:10 +0000 UTC]

I think that would be a matter of opinion . I am sure Sable thinks she is an amazing friend

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LordLard In reply to ShadowhawkOne [2019-10-13 17:23:29 +0000 UTC]

Villains stick together!

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ShadowhawkOne In reply to LordLard [2019-10-13 17:53:19 +0000 UTC]

Members of the same union?

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LordLard In reply to ShadowhawkOne [2019-10-13 20:57:14 +0000 UTC]

One for all, and all for one!

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ShadowhawkOne In reply to LordLard [2019-10-13 20:59:55 +0000 UTC]

You just never learn do you?

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LordLard In reply to ShadowhawkOne [2019-10-13 21:08:33 +0000 UTC]

Not if I can help it!

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FDComics [2019-10-10 10:37:55 +0000 UTC]

The "All Violators Will Be Towed" sign seems appropriate. I think that's what Cracovia is planning to do to him


Wonderful chapter, and nice for Sable to have a little help and comfort

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ShadowhawkOne In reply to FDComics [2019-10-10 18:53:16 +0000 UTC]

LOL If only he was so lucky it would only be a sign if she gets her hands on him.


Thanks, I think her friends showed up just in time to keep her from making a horrible mistake

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thomvinson [2019-10-09 03:07:48 +0000 UTC]

Fascinating story, wonderful scene! 

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ShadowhawkOne In reply to thomvinson [2019-10-09 09:30:57 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Thom glad you like it.

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thomvinson In reply to ShadowhawkOne [2019-10-09 23:45:34 +0000 UTC]

Ya done good man! 

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ShadowhawkOne In reply to thomvinson [2019-10-10 15:12:53 +0000 UTC]

Thank you sir I appreciate that

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thomvinson In reply to ShadowhawkOne [2019-10-10 15:59:58 +0000 UTC]

Most certainly sir! 

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akizz [2019-10-09 02:04:42 +0000 UTC]

Glad to see Sable getting help

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ShadowhawkOne In reply to akizz [2019-10-09 09:30:40 +0000 UTC]

yeah she has had a rough go of late but I fear it isn't going to be easy sailing yet.

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White0wlsuperheroine [2019-10-09 01:56:44 +0000 UTC]

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ShadowhawkOne In reply to White0wlsuperheroine [2019-10-09 09:30:01 +0000 UTC]

I think Sable just needed to hear that.


I am sure that things will become clearer in part 3

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Dangerguy01 [2019-10-09 01:50:22 +0000 UTC]

FF may get in peril a lot, but she seems suited to the role of superheroine hug therapist.

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ShadowhawkOne In reply to Dangerguy01 [2019-10-09 09:28:53 +0000 UTC]

She is really good at that, and Sable certainly needs a hug right now.

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MirrorKhaos [2019-10-08 21:47:19 +0000 UTC]

Excellent story.

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ShadowhawkOne In reply to MirrorKhaos [2019-10-09 09:28:24 +0000 UTC]

Thanks glad you liked it

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devduck01 [2019-10-08 19:56:53 +0000 UTC]

I wonder if the bad guy is going to get towed.

Awesome art buddy and a great story...this is what friends are for, to help you, give you a shoulder to cry on and stop you from doing anything you might later regret.

Ends on an ominous note tho..I wonder who is watching...and what is phase 2?

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ShadowhawkOne In reply to devduck01 [2019-10-08 20:49:58 +0000 UTC]

1 am sure he would be able to call an Uber if that happened.

I am sure that later Sable will be very glad she had some friends to step in and help her at this point in her life.

I am sure that the answers to those questions are... Yep you guessed it. Linear!   

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devduck01 In reply to ShadowhawkOne [2019-10-12 08:31:33 +0000 UTC]

What time does the 24A Linear to answers stop here?

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ShadowhawkOne In reply to devduck01 [2019-10-12 08:36:08 +0000 UTC]

I really need to learn to not use your own jokes against you...

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devduck01 In reply to ShadowhawkOne [2019-10-12 08:46:09 +0000 UTC]

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Soolz [2019-10-08 19:07:14 +0000 UTC]

Hope she'll bounce back soon. Otherwise it could be Punisher route.

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ShadowhawkOne In reply to Soolz [2019-10-08 20:08:56 +0000 UTC]

Well hopefully we will see soon

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Soolz In reply to ShadowhawkOne [2019-10-08 20:23:30 +0000 UTC]

Short turn to dark (not too dark) could be interesting. Ask Dee.

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Cracoviia [2019-10-08 19:03:27 +0000 UTC]

Superb, both the story (I mean before my tiny suggestions ) and the image. Obviously I've seen the written part, but I still really like the idea - Sable's increased aggression and violence overcome by the intervention of her friends. Sometimes our friends know better what we need than we do. Cracovia can stop Sable doing bad things, but FF is really good at helping people feel a little bit better. And she needs the second just as much as the first.


The image is gorgeous. The hug between Sable and FF is so tender, while Cracovia effortlessly pinning the guys in place works very well as a harsh, dynamic contrast to the soft, slow scene on the left. I love how C and FF look in that lighting too. Awesome work, visually and thematically

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ShadowhawkOne In reply to Cracoviia [2019-10-08 20:31:56 +0000 UTC]

Well it was your suggestions that really gave the story that extra bit. Thank you! It is fortunate that Sable has friends like Cracovia and Felicity to stop her from doing something that she would later regret. The pair of them are a great pair when it really counts.


I figured Felicity would be the better hugger than holding onto the bad guy. Although I do love the fact that Cracovia effortlessly keeps him under control. Sable is very glad to have friends like these two when it really counts!

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Cracoviia In reply to ShadowhawkOne [2019-10-08 23:44:33 +0000 UTC]

C and FF do make a good team - one grabs, one hugs. Though I'm sure there will be a Cracovia Bearhug later too

They - and her other friends - will be more important than ever. Though worried about the sinister lurkers, hopefully Fliss isn't going to become a target for them...what next for their scheme? We'll wait eagerly to find out

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ShadowhawkOne In reply to Cracoviia [2019-10-10 18:56:16 +0000 UTC]

I have no doubt that Sable will get a Cracovia sized hug after the criminal is safely locked away. I am sure that Fliss and Cracovia are on the list of heroines to watch after ruining whoevers plan this was.

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RagingCyc0ne [2019-10-08 16:01:02 +0000 UTC]

Does this mean the vengeful streak is over?

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ShadowhawkOne In reply to RagingCyc0ne [2019-10-08 16:10:34 +0000 UTC]

I don't know if I would say that, but it does certainly raise the question "What is phase 2"?

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