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Published: 2010-02-16 12:45:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 111; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 22
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No clue :'DI was kinda bored and wanted to draw a glowyish picture.
So I drew Hikari.
Because...
Hikari = light?
XD
lol, yeaaah...
And I know she's a Christmas Kougra, but...I dunno.
I forgot her stripes.
Anyways, I'm requesting critique on this thing.
But if I've done something wrong, try to put it in the nicest way possible XD
I bruise easily /brick'd
Art and Character (c) Me
Kougra (c) Neopets.Com
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Comments: 21
Swipe-swiftly [2010-02-16 18:09:42 +0000 UTC]
I can't give you a PROPER critique, so I'll give you a small little one in this message C:
First off, I'll start with the colours. They're nice and bold, and appealing to the eye.
Onto the actual drawing. I'd definately say it's an impovement. However, the clenched paw/hand looks somewhat odd, as if it was lacking in bones. (Lockhart's spell, anyone? xD) I think that both your human and animal anatomy could use a little practice. Maybe you could use some references to help you?
I like the scene, though it is unclear as to what exactly is happening. I like the glow, but maybe instead of putting it totally behind the hand, you could make a low-opacity layer over the top to make it look like it's her hand that's glowing; not her knuckles. Unless, of course, it IS supposed to come from her knuckles.
Shading-wise, it's good. However, to make it even nicer, maybe you could use more tones and maybe shade/highlight the folds, or just a wider area than just a line; making it more dynamic and interesting.
Overall, it's good, well done. But more anatomy practice is needed.
I hope that wasn't too harsh Dx
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ShadowMunchlax In reply to Swipe-swiftly [2010-02-16 18:12:13 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I hate the hand
She was going to be reaching out with her fingers spread but...I can not draw fingers.
And I wanted to do the glow like that, but I have no idea how to do that owe;
And to be honest, I don't know what's going on to be honest.
I just really wanted to draw something like this. X'D
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Swipe-swiftly In reply to ShadowMunchlax [2010-02-16 18:14:04 +0000 UTC]
You just need more practice, is all ^^
References are your BEST FRIEND.
It's simple, create a new layer, make the glow over the hand, then go to layer opacity and change it there
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ShadowMunchlax In reply to Swipe-swiftly [2010-02-16 18:15:34 +0000 UTC]
Yeah P:
There's not many places to find anthro-Neopets pics though. owe;
Aaaah, yay!
Now I can draw a picture of Roly using Focus Punch! x33
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Swipe-swiftly In reply to ShadowMunchlax [2010-02-16 18:19:27 +0000 UTC]
Use human references, it's the same. Then look at some animal references for the animal parts. That's all anthros are; fuzzy people. You don't need any special refs for them.
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ShadowMunchlax In reply to Swipe-swiftly [2010-02-16 18:20:11 +0000 UTC]
Hmm, yes, you're correct.
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Swipe-swiftly In reply to Swipe-swiftly [2010-02-16 18:10:51 +0000 UTC]
FFFF- I forgot to add that to make the wings more demon-like, exaggurate the bones and skin folds. C:
Okay, now I'm good.
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clippy21 [2010-02-16 14:56:29 +0000 UTC]
what is the pinkish dimond thing?
btw love your new icon
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ShadowMunchlax In reply to clippy21 [2010-02-16 14:57:20 +0000 UTC]
It's the demons wings xD
Thanks - Luke made it for his icon family C:
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clippy21 In reply to ShadowMunchlax [2010-02-16 15:03:14 +0000 UTC]
oh
ye i just saw lukes icon chain thing
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Mr-Munchlax [2010-02-16 14:07:59 +0000 UTC]
This looks really awesome and bright! and look at all that nice soft opacity ^w^
for all this effort you get a present, which im about to upload. a new icon! ^^
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ShadowMunchlax In reply to Mr-Munchlax [2010-02-16 14:09:18 +0000 UTC]
Thanks :3
Lol, yaaaay XD
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Hobo-pup [2010-02-16 12:53:21 +0000 UTC]
I can't critique sadly but I will say this: Very good. I like how you put the glowing and the contrast between light and dark.
Is the glowing siloheutte Hikari in demon form or Chika?
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ShadowMunchlax In reply to Hobo-pup [2010-02-16 13:01:49 +0000 UTC]
Thanks. :]
The siloheutte is of Hikari in demon form, yes.
For some reason, she goes quad when she does, lol XD
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