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Published: 2008-05-17 00:13:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 23626; Favourites: 502; Downloads: 1196
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Mai's outfit from FF3.Not as good as I expected it to be, but feel free to point out my mistakes.
Sometimes I feel like I should redo them. But I have other priorities.
Mai Shiranui and Fatal Fury are property of SNKPlaymore. Drawing by me.
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Comments: 37
The arms are a bit odd (is the left one actually bent backwards? 
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Well, it does seem that I have gotten the perspective a bit wrong. The arm at the left (her right one) has her palm outward, that's why it seems "backwards".
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although i prefer the other one ( Breasts that big scare me >.< ) you do pay great attension to detail i love the pose too, and the feet ( i cant draw feet T.T )
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Thanks for your comments, it's always nice when people pay attention to the cheeskake-unrelated details.
And, well, even I ended finding this bust size too large (but only because I made Mai with shorter limbs this time 
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I applaud you, for making a picture where (while the focus is still her breasts) it's not just drawn for the sake of boobs, but is well-executed with only a few slight proportion issues - though I'm really not one to point those out or nitpick over them, as I work with words, not images.
Nonetheless, very impressive, as is the rest of your gallery. Consider yourself watched, good sir.
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Never be afraid of criticising just because you don't draw; it's not a requisite.
Thanks a lot for your comment and the watch.
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oh man.... you really do an awesome job with breasts.... seriously, some of the better I've seen....
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^_^. If I like something so much, I just have no excuse to be sloppy.
But more seriously, if I'm going to do this kind of fanservice, I have better do it well. As SaburoX said, one must not settle for "wank fodder".
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The legs look a little bit short, especially since Mai has always had those killer long legs, though it may just behow she's bent over tht makes it look that way.
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I left them short on purpose, thinking that the image had a chibi-like feel. I'm rethinking that, though.
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The chest kinda throws it all off I think. They're so big and you just wanna keep proper proportion so you're kinda forced to make her legs strong enough to maintain that upper body, therefore making the legs seem shorter than they really are. Otherwise the legs aren't so short. 
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It's indeed a matter of proportion. If the legs are shorter than they must, then the chest looks even bigger because of the reduced body height. That may have it's appeal, but has a cost of disbalancing the image.
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Oh the troubles of an artist, oh well, you musn't let it get to you right? Just keep drawing
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Love these. PLEASE color some of them when you have time.
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I will, but I'm afraid that this particualr series of drawings currently have low priority on my list.
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First off, this is really great, and I'm always astounded by the consistent quality of your lines. That said, at this angle, I think that her breasts would not sit so high on her chest, and would be more fluid than you have drawn them. Also, I think the folds on the cloth look a little off, but that is a minor, minor point.
Again, you did a great job with this.
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Thanks.
You might be right about her breasts... the perspective makes drawing some things correctly tricky. But, still, I like how they look ^o^.
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I noticed that in some of your works, the legs are a little too short-- you may want to work on lengthening them a bit.
Other than that, good work.
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Thanks. I might try that; I've been noticing that the images need more balance.
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