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Published: 2004-09-18 20:30:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 576; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 16
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Description Love's a needle full of air
And love is blood that isn't there
And rusty knives and broken lives
And desperate free-fall concrete dives...

Love's a tango with a train
And love's a bullet in the brain
And busy streets, traffic to beat
And cocktails of Draino and "Do Not Eat"...

Love's a lover on a string
And love's the song the Reaper sings
It's popping more, and wrists that pour
And those two green eyes at my locker door...
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Comments: 21

SisterSafetyPin [2005-04-20 14:31:11 +0000 UTC]

Love just might be disgusting, or whatever---but honestly. It can be beautiful. I hit this randomly, and once again, I'm disappointed.
Jesus, Nicole. Quit doing despair. It's very cliche, these days. *rolls eyes*

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blackrose762 [2004-12-18 20:58:29 +0000 UTC]

I like this alot...
Im sorry about your relationship not working out....
a big poor you....
i hope your ok.
(you know you can talk to me about it yeah? if you wanna that is.... tell me to bugger off if im sticking my nose in too much....)
i only wanna help ya!

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deadrose828 [2004-10-17 22:36:58 +0000 UTC]

i've got a question o.o
for this class in school we're supposed to bring in a favorite poem of ours
and since this was the first poem i thought of, and the most recent addition to my list opf favorites in my head
would it be okay if i used it?
to show to everyone
all credit to you, of course

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naturalfailure [2004-10-11 13:22:09 +0000 UTC]

And the truth shall not set you free, but bind you in chains of lies. Loving this poem. Feeling this way.

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bittersweet2 [2004-10-11 03:55:22 +0000 UTC]

i like how it's a unique take on love

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KrazyJellyBean [2004-10-07 10:25:26 +0000 UTC]

Fabulous. :fav+:

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Intoxication-stock [2004-09-20 12:47:10 +0000 UTC]

Resist!!!! Resist!!! Hey your sittin right beside me!! lol Resist!!!

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shadowpuppet13 In reply to Intoxication-stock [2004-09-20 19:52:20 +0000 UTC]

haha you da-orck. and resist? there's nothing to resist, lol

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Intoxication-stock In reply to shadowpuppet13 [2004-09-20 22:30:24 +0000 UTC]

Yes i am the Da-Orck!! lol good there better not be anything to resist!! *shudders* don't wanna think about it!! Don't make me run around the school claiming your mine!! lol You know youd like it!! lol okay maybe not, but yeah ya kno

~Gabrielle

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shadowpuppet13 In reply to Intoxication-stock [2004-09-20 23:27:22 +0000 UTC]

lol you'd do it wouldnt you?? "dont touch her she's mine!! growls", haha, that would be funny. but you dont need to do that, there is definatly nothing to resist. im explaining to him that there is no way that i can ever love him again and he needs to move on. i doubt he will listen, but oh well worth a try.

mine!! lol that still makes me laugh because i know youd do it...

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Intoxication-stock In reply to shadowpuppet13 [2004-09-21 11:23:44 +0000 UTC]

*jumps on top of you* MINE I TELL YOU!!! lol okay well other then the what i said earlier i like the poem!!

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shadowpuppet13 In reply to Intoxication-stock [2004-09-21 12:10:50 +0000 UTC]

lol ok, and hey youre sitting right beside me now!!! and shut up i can type how i wanna type!!!!!

~chloe

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Intoxication-stock In reply to shadowpuppet13 [2004-09-21 12:30:23 +0000 UTC]

But you type with TWO fingers!!! Peck Peck Peck!!!! *stabs the keyboard with two fingers* yep yep Yes you are sitting by me *leans over and hits you!* and don't give me that im aenimic shit either!!

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shadowpuppet13 In reply to Intoxication-stock [2004-09-21 12:34:46 +0000 UTC]

"why'd you hit me???" lol that was funny. pornography!!! lol

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Intoxication-stock In reply to shadowpuppet13 [2004-09-21 19:30:22 +0000 UTC]

Our gay ass skool computers!!!! and there nonpornography

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shadowpuppet13 In reply to Intoxication-stock [2004-09-22 00:20:07 +0000 UTC]

i know can you beleive that shit...lol

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Intoxication-stock In reply to shadowpuppet13 [2004-09-22 01:13:44 +0000 UTC]

Nope!!

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Alienstar [2004-09-19 03:23:36 +0000 UTC]

Awwww....thats so beatifull, makes my attempt to write about love seem yuck....

You have a tallent, pls keep writting

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shadowpuppet13 In reply to Alienstar [2004-09-19 16:26:30 +0000 UTC]

thank you, and dont worry, i dont think ill ever stop writing

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deadrose828 [2004-09-19 00:29:46 +0000 UTC]

AHHHHHHH OMG ><
wow you are so amazing with your oh-so-amazing poetry.
out the wazoo ( YOU'RE AWESOME

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shadowpuppet13 In reply to deadrose828 [2004-09-19 16:25:01 +0000 UTC]

haha, thanks so much! out the wazoo, lol

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