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ShadowsofRaen — Goodbye by-nc-nd
Published: 2007-06-21 22:53:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 130; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Description I need your help,
But you're never there,
I must wonder,
Do you even care?

So full of pain,
Why can't you see,
Just how much you're hurting me.

Surrounded by my dreams,
Made of Glass,
One wrong move and I'm forgotten.

~Pieces of the Past~

Haunting me,
How can I make you see?
Why won't your smile leave me be?

Lying here-broken-
Wishing for the moon,
I swear this is all that is takes,
Even when blinded by the darkness of hate.

So I'm saying Goodbye,
This is long overdue,
Since I can't have meant that much to you.
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Comments: 10

Ariasvind [2007-06-24 17:05:06 +0000 UTC]

...Nice 'un

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ShadowsofRaen In reply to Ariasvind [2007-06-25 04:21:34 +0000 UTC]

Thanks ^-^

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Ariasvind In reply to ShadowsofRaen [2007-06-25 13:30:56 +0000 UTC]

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zombie-eatflesh [2007-06-23 00:39:50 +0000 UTC]

which ex...

i probably know damn well which one but i'm at my aunt and uncle's house and i had my first esspresso ever earlier and i'm kinda loopy...

so yeah...

once again i shall say that i love it... wait... i don't think i've even told you yet... so, I LOVE IT
^^

I LURVELS YOU SISSY!!!!!

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zombie-eatflesh In reply to zombie-eatflesh [2007-06-23 15:53:56 +0000 UTC]

just until sunday

we went kayaking today in perdido bay
it was so much fun
we had mullet jumping meer feet away from us and we had a dolphin just about 20 feet away.

it was so cool

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ShadowsofRaen In reply to zombie-eatflesh [2007-06-23 04:21:38 +0000 UTC]

loopy? off an espresso? you aint right child, lol luvs you too. Yea- the first one, not oreo. lol so how long are you over there for? I LOVE YOU TOO SWEETIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!~stay safe and all that jazz


HELL YEA DRIVERS' ED IS OVER!!!!!!!!WOHOOOOOO! lol Lurv

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Namaste-Divine [2007-06-22 01:15:21 +0000 UTC]

I really love this- ~pieces of the past~ LOVELY! Great poetry once again-so nice reading it! ^_^

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ShadowsofRaen In reply to Namaste-Divine [2007-06-22 02:16:16 +0000 UTC]

Yay! Glad you like ^___^ Wrote it in math class one day-- guess I forgot to post it >> thanx bunches SMILEYS!!!!~Raen

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Namaste-Divine In reply to ShadowsofRaen [2007-06-23 20:16:05 +0000 UTC]

Math class is always a good place to write poetry! Yup! ^_^ I really love it!

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ShadowsofRaen In reply to Namaste-Divine [2007-06-25 04:13:46 +0000 UTC]

Yuppers ^-^ glad you like it so much *heart* Stay safe ~Raen

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