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ShadowsofRaen — _TheGathering_
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Published: 2007-04-02 03:12:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 92; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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The Girl took a deep breath before she began to run, sideways, facing The Rift. Closing her eyes briefly, she saw Them following her. Her gray-green eyes became steely as she passed the other Korii. Sprinting, she took a deep breath, preparing for the next part of the Gathering. Taking traditional form, reaching for the blurred, starry sky, she began. Her body whirled and twisted to a pulsing rhythm that came from deep within her soul. She gave herself into the beat of her heart; the sigh of an unheard wind. Shrouding her in the glow of a million stars.It ended then; Leaving her empty and shattering that fragile soul into a million heartbreaking pieces. Dripping to the ground, crystal tears; something had changed, a part of her had been stolen and she could never get it back. That much she knew.
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Hmmm. I don't think I get it enough. Even with the explanation you've given, I'm still confused about it
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lol..yeah this wasn't meant to be a stand-alone piece so I can see where it is confusing. ^-^
This young girl, Tirei, has been taken in and trained to harvest the energy of the spirits at an academy like thing. The Korii are her other "classmates", they don't make her life very easy because she was formerly a slave.
The harvesting of such energy is called The Gathering, The Rift is a sort of gateway from/to the spirit realm. The Korii use a ritual that is very much like dance to call the spirits and capture some of their energy.
This excerpt is Tirei's first Gathering, it is sort of her character introduction.
Hope that makes things slightly clearer! Please feel free to ask any questions or anything, I need to know how to make it better. ^-^
Thanx
Raen
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Ah, now I get it
How to make it better, you say? Perhaps providing a more ellaborated description of the characters, where they are, what their current/past situaction, etc... You know, enlarge the text a bit
Sorry about me always 'being confused' ^^U
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lol good, eventually there will actually be more information, this was just a brain fart basically lol.
It's not a problem, ^-^ I know this piece was rather short and vague lol. Thanks so much for reviewing ^-^ it means alot
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I'll do my best to get some more of this written, it's just kinda an idea floating in my head at the moment ^-^
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there's so much crap in your brain i'm suprised so much organized thought could exist, i HATE YOU
lol i'm really soryy but my previouse go-with-the-flow mood has been replaced with my i-hate-you-and-the-rest-of-the-world-can-burn-in-hell mood that i live in most of the time. but i really do love you
and i was so lost at first too, gooooosh so vague!
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lol ...coherent thought ???What's that? gawd....i hate you too! rofl Lurvs!!!!
yea np, I was stuck in the car w/ alicia today so... *bummed
mwhahaha! It's supposed to be vague! smileys!!!!!!!!!!!
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You're welcome. I'm eager to see what's next
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