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Shaipi — Contest The Indian Summer

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Published: 2014-11-18 17:37:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 905; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 2
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Description This happenned in this warm place
Orange clouds in an embrace,
In my heart and in my eyes, 
Not a bise, but a prize.

A soft miracle,
As ephemeral as lyrical,
Witnessed with a friend,
O dear she is.

With those memories,
Under the warm cottons,
During this hot automn,
The blossom of Winter,
Whizzes between my fingers.

This is with this Indian Summer,
That my heart became an hummer.

My entry for This contest

Neige © R-no71
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Comments: 4

HH--PurposeOfLife [2014-12-02 17:17:34 +0000 UTC]

Congrats on the special mentions <3 you really deserved the praise ~

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Shaipi In reply to HH--PurposeOfLife [2014-12-06 09:30:26 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much, all of your comments are a pleasure to read, really <3

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HH--PurposeOfLife In reply to Shaipi [2014-12-06 16:09:22 +0000 UTC]

You're really welcome <3 It's no problem at all ~

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HH--PurposeOfLife [2014-11-18 20:20:57 +0000 UTC]

This is really elegant and beautiful looking, it's really calm and soft ^-^ I love the colours ou used and also the scene layed out <3 I think it fits perfectly with the theme and the written piece I think you did a brilliant job, good luck in the contest ~

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