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RasheruSuzie [2018-08-05 15:57:27 +0000 UTC]

Hello, I’m commenting from ProjectComment ^^

I quite like the style and character design on this ^^ I assume it’s your OC right? The color scheme is definitely interesting and works well for the style of the character. I also like the full-black areas which add contrast.

I think the pose could be made more dynamic quite easily though. The stepping motion is understandable but I find it hard to tell if she’s running, stopping, going forward or backward. Inclining her upper body forward would certainly make her look more comfortable in the movement, and you could even rotate the whole character a bit more forward if she is running forward.

Example:

I notice you’re using only straight lines except in a spot or two, but some areas could maybe use a few curved lines, such as the ponytail, the cape and the arms. You can keep it very sharp while integrating some curves, which will only add more contrast to the sharp edges while allowing a more natural flow to those organic areas.

Lastly, you could afford to use a lot more shading, and much darker shadows (I think that would only enhance the style). Choose your light direction, and then add shadows to everything that faces away from the light. You could have all of the back leg in the shadows, for example.

Overall though, a very fun character, neat color scheme, clean lineart in most places, and I really like her face! ^^b

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DeezzArt [2018-08-04 01:09:42 +0000 UTC]

it looks really nice ! 
that's a badass oc 

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momoyumiko10 [2018-08-03 15:27:45 +0000 UTC]

daaaaamnn... pam looks so damn badass.

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