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Published: 2011-05-19 05:33:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 376; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 0
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Description I stumble into a decrepit butcher shop, ceiling caved in, walls collapsing, and the kind of damage years of neglect will do. A ghostly stream of light penetrates the haze of dust from a hole in the roof, periodically interrupted by a swinging carcass hanging from the ceiling. The only sounds are the creaks of meat hooks, swinging back and forth.

There is a numbness in my lower left abdomen so profound it almost hurts. I look down to see that there is a gaping wound- not bloody or gorey, but worn, as an aging and well used pair of jeans wears holes at the knees. The edges of the wound are frayed; the slightest graze of the hand rips threads of flesh from the edges. The sound produced makes me shudder. Inside is hollow, little more than skin draped over a bony skeleton.

The butcher merely looks on in silent contempt from behind the counter, covered in dried blood. He slips into the back, and I collapse onto a pile of rubble nearby. As I struggle to focus my fading vision, I see a gleam on the corner of a freshly cleaned cleaver looming overhead.

I wake up clutching my stomach so hard my nails draw blood.
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Comments: 3

speakgibberish1 [2012-07-16 10:50:02 +0000 UTC]

The image is interesting and extremely nightmareish, but the excessive use of adjectives genuinely detracts from the dream-likeness of the piece.

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AsylumAtavist [2011-09-17 14:25:32 +0000 UTC]

Wow- I'm not sure which is worse, being haunted by our own mind every single night alive, or never dreaming at all. I'm not sure what it means, but I have heard that dreams are based hidden thoughts and feelings...

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ArrogantProteus [2011-05-22 02:11:46 +0000 UTC]

I'm not sure on the meaning, but the imagery was well done. I'd stay away from meat for a while just in case though.

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