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Awesome! Can't wait to see more! What program do you use for your artwork?
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Thank you. ^_^
My using tool? I have always used Photoshop CS.
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Really? It looks like something more professional, like manga studio or something
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LOL Thank you! I'm glad you say so.
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lol poor guy xD
hmm I think this page has a little bit of anatomy problems ya know 8) no offense of course
like the white wolf look a little odd in the bottom left panel
as for the words. hmm maybe in the first panel you should've done 'Wow!' with just the '!' and no '?' because then its like he's saying 'wow?' and thats kinda weird xD
bomps should be spelled 'bumps' and for that panel in what the white wolf says: 'behind me' should be 'me behind' because it makes more sense since he is trying to say that the wolf left them.
and maybe 'though' could be changed to 'although'
sorry for all the crits 
love the story plot 8)
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Nice. I really enjoy your comic, it's an interesting story line so far. I can't wait to see more.
I quite like the white one. >.< She's cool.
May I offer some advice? Maybe you should have someone to edit you're english, as the grammar in the speech bubbles isn't the best. Unless you meant to have improper grammar... In that case, ignore me.
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Wow! Thank you very much!
I'm not a native English speaker. I guess my English often unnatural and improper. So I hope native speakers advise me correct English about my comic. If it's not trouble to you, I want to get your advice. ^_^
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Aye, I figured you weren't. Being from Japan and all...
Mmkay, no problem.
'I shall tell you what I want to tell.' Should probably be: 'I shall tell you what I want to say.'
'yet you left behind me just a little while ago!' Should probably be: 'yet you left me behind just a little while ago!'
'Chief has always warned us over and over!' Either get rid of the 'always' OR the 'over and over'. Using both just doesn't sound right.
Those are just suggestions to make it sound better.... But if you like how it is now, then you can just ignore them. ^_^
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Wow! Thank you for a concrete explanation!!
I corrected them at once!! (^_^)/
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No problem!
Don't hesitate to ask if you ever want me to look a page over.
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Yes! Thank you! ^_^
Needless to say, I'd like to get your advise from now on.
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It was really realistic, but this one's more cartoony.
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YAY! NEW CHAPTER! LOL! tis is funny *bonks him on the head again* but where'd the puppy go?
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Thank you. ^_^
Inayori? I will refer to him next page.
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hehehe! That is brilliant, Theyre so cute together x) I love her healing powers, that's so cool!
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Cute? I'm glad you say so. Thank you! (^_^)/
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Lmao! I love Takeru's expression in the bottom panel! The storyline is flowing nicely! Keep up the great work!
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Thank you. ^_^
I will keep it up.
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Well? Inayori?
He is safe.
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true.....but still so many bumps <^/.\^>;;
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I will refer to him in a next page.
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Heh, awesome page. 
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Thank you! I'm glad you love her.
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