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What? I thought these were wolves...
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So what?
Lion don't talk too, even if lions talked in "Lion King".
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Well, real-life they don't but this is not real so there you go
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That's so sad Oto lost her mother when she was just a pup poor thing it's like i'm watching a japnese movie i love it!
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Yes. She has got a sad memory.
But she think she is happy now because Takeru always protects her at the lisk of his life.
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That's good i can see you like wolves i like dragons but i think wolves are cool.
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poor oto TT~TT
mmm you know I could help you fix the english if you want =3
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Yes. She is a poor girl.
But Takeru has always protected her.
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i hope you like my new drew whit your wolf
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Your english is a little broken but it is still easy to read and understand. The way you put the musculature into your characters is very neat, and I laugh every time a chibi character pops into the panels!
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while reading this I've been trying to figure out how you make this. do you use colored pencils, markers, what? its very well done ^^
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Thank you. ^^
Actually I've used Photoshop. :3
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ok that explains a lot! thank you! more this is good more!
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I love this page.
I'm gonna take a wild guess and say they will meet her brother in the future.
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Thank you! ^^
Yes. Surely she will meet her brother. :3
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XD
So, how often do you post pages?
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I won't draw the next page for a while.
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Please wait it without hurry. ^_^
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:]
No worries, I'll be busy with my and 's graphic novel coming out.
But I shall look for yours in the future
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Her father was the Wolves and her mother was the Foxes.
The Wolves and the Foxes hate each other.
She is a fox-hybrid. So they hate her. : )
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Oh, but just because they were enemies in the past, dont mean that she's "the daughter of evil"
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The daughter of evil(=the Foxes)
Understand? :3
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I understood THAT! 
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Uhm... But they hate all of the Foxes. It's no problem for them that she is not evil. :3
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Yeah well, they are all a bunch of idiots!
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The Wolves and the Foxes have a terrible hatred each other...
But Oto will become the leader of their harmony someday. ^^
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YAY! go Oto! 
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your comic remind sme a lot of GDW i think cause of the way you draw
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Thank you! Ginga is my best favorite comic.
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Nice page, though the text feels not quite right this way. In panel 3 and 4 it should probably be more like "My mother was a fox" or "one of the foxes", though I wouldn't recommend the second, but if you want to stress the clan aspect then It's OK I think. If you feel like putting the name of their species in capitals (i.e. "Fox") go ahead, but usually It'd be written in lowercase. (Once again, this would emphasize the clan part of it, which I assume is what you're trying to achieve here.)
Furthermore, I'd write it "[...] and me with one of the Wolves" or "But the father of my brother and me was" + "a wolf"/"one of the Wolves"
Then, "[...]wasn't able to live in the Foxes' society anymore and got out of there with us..."
Finally for the last sentence I see several options. Either say "Since then we lived in the 'here and there'" or "Since then we lived here and there" or "Since then we traveled from here to there", your choice ^^
Aaand... I'm not to sure but I don't think one can "become alone"...I'd like a native-speakers opinion here!!
Anyway I never heard of it so I'd say it's saver to replace it with "was left (all) alone" or "was all on my own"
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Oh and its "_the_ promise" in the last panel as it has been defined before hand.
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The comics are amazing! I love the style and colors! How do you do those speed lines? owo Too cool!
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