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I'm a non-native English speaker. So maybe my English in the comic will be sometime wrong. Excuse me.
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First critique woo!
I have seen a wolf/dog comic before, very well drawn, amazing plot, and this looks very similar to it. I like the drawing style, very unique, I have never really seen anything like it before. It does give quite an impact, makes me think these wolves are going to war or a meeting or something. I like how the only 2 wearing clothes are almost certainly the ones in charge, and the shading and over-all effect is very well done. The background and shading I really like, it is really very good, and you've been careful with ALL the details. All in all, I think it is a very good first-page/cover.
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i hope you dont take offense to i think that shouldn't make them so muscular, the outfit and the size of the alpha already lets you know he is strong. i think that it would be better to make him look like a normal wolf body structure wise. as for the white wolf, i think her tail is too fluffy, it should have more body to it like the alpha;s and their muzzles seem a little boxy. Also, i think there should be a different font for hte title, maybe something more dramatic looking. i meant this in the kindest way and this picture honestly seems great.
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This is a very good drawing. It reminds me of Ginga and Wolfs Rain. The rocks look very good and the shading of the wolves is also very well done. what you could work on is the eyes because wolf eyes don't take up much of the face but if its your style then never mind. Whatever works for you. I like the clothing you give your characters, it gives them more individuality and makes them more interesting to look at. The font, I think, works very well. Spiritual Stones should have a sort of wispy look to them so I think you did a good job picking the font. Over all, this is a very good drawing. Well done and keep it up e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
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Well. this is my first time that I'm someone writing a critique to an artist that I'm meeting him for the first time. Especially from Japan. Anyhow here goes nothing. On this photography or a cover how should I say It's done perfect. The anatomy on these wolves are done perfectly amazing, the atmosphere is done good and the background is done great. The stars on the night sky are done perfect. Colors are very soft, and this painting technique that you've using it It's reminds me on old Japanese animated movies that I've watch when I've was a kid. The shadows effect that you've did it on them It's done beautiful and amazing too. Only the fond should be changed on the cover, rest there's no need to change. The shadows effect and cloth that You draw them it looks like super heroes. The colors and the night sky It's done perfect. This background on the cover is done very original and incredible. The colors are fine the details are done perfect. I like how you did there eyes on the dark background. They are done perfect and the fur detail that you did on them It's done great. The clothe is very well draw, It's full of details, and what I mostly like is how did you do the light effects on them. The brightness technique It's done precisely and beautiful too. The cover is very original, Vision is done Incredible, Originality is done perfect, Technique is very professional and the Impact is done beautiful. The eyes are very well draw and there sparkle effects that you've draw on them are perfect. Can't wait to see you're next move and can't wait to see next page of you're magnificent comic. Good luck with that. We all wait to see you're next move that you've make!
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This is incredibly beautiful and inspiring artwork. It's very peculiar,so it' impossible to judge it unequivocally.
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One of the most amazing things in your work is the composition. It was done correctly: the group of wolves stay in the centre,the perspective is on.
I love the way how you made your characters. Animals have got massive, powerful muscles and body forms are give to them more original charm. They've got natural fur colours and mystical lights in their eyes which look together incredibly beautiful. Accessories and battle equipment on them were made very artfully and finely.
What about the technique and the vision of nature,so they're, I consider, most progressive. The sky has got deep profound colours and stars look very realistic and stunning, because they really remind impressive landscapes of space. I just can't stop to adore of your rocks. Honestly, you really surprised me by them, you can draw and paint such precise and concrete mountain stones structucture, many artists aren't able to make them such closed to the real as you do !
But it's impossible to describe artwork without telling about its lineart and colouring. Well, the first one is very neat and professionaly done. Just look on its strokes-they are very eloquently and well drawn-that combination looks powerful.And colours are smooth and pleasant for an eye. Or fur details, for example.
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Despite of all its appeal and quality of this work, however has got some disadvantages. For example, colours need more shades and dynamism, they look a bit pale and unfinished-they need much development Also I want to remark wolves'faces. They look like they were copied roughly from photographs-they're luck of the individual lines of face and a bit senseless.
However, I see in your work more advantages than disadvantages, it worth of it. But I feel that your art generally is very promoted and actual. Keep on continue develop it and, I'm sure, you'll reach whatever you want. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
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This is also My first Critique but ill give it a shot.This cover, is showing a picture of what will happen in the future of the comic.Also when you are looking in to the eyes off the wolves you can see what emotion and personalities they have and their position bring it all together.The shading also brings in the mood of the theme.I would love to say that your style of the wolves and clothing is much better them some i've seen,for I myself HATE drawing clothing.But you made it look easy to do. In all of this I say that I could see this being sold in a store.
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This is my first critique, but I will do my best. Also, I am only speaking of this single image, not the comic. I think the humanization of the wolves is very clever, using clothes and expressive eyes. The pectorial muscles on the Alpha wolf seem a bit much to me, but that might be a personal opinion. The image itself is very well rendered and I think your style works well with what you were doing. My only suggestion would be to find a different font for the title. That one really clashes with the image and font needs to accent the image, not detract from me. (Thank you typography class.)
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I think that this girl is right! You can use the old century gothic fond. Then it will looks awesome!
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Thank you very much for your kind and concrete opinion and advice. ^^
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I haven't even started reading, and I already have to ask how the hell they made Japanese styleΒ DΕ's without hands.
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Maybe no. I don't have a time for drawing continuation of this one.
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I hope you do sometime in the future, as I and everyone of your fans miss it. It is one of the best wolf comics on DA!
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this is an awesome picture the wolves are awesome the title is awesome everything is awesome keep going
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I give Spiritual Stones rating 1,000,000/10Β
awesome work hiroyuki chan
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Hey sheltiewolf this manga is freaking awesome i give this 10/10 when are you going to be finish with page 30 I need to know what happens next.
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Amazing artwork! I'll be sure to keep up to date with the story :3
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s called as a cartoon ΠΊΠ°ΠΊ Π½Π°Π·ΡΠ²Π°Π΅ΡΡΡΡ ΠΌΡΠ»ΡΡΠΊΒ
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your welcome and it was even more fun for me, sinse im creating a manga about wolves as well. so I got a few ideas on what to do. so thanks and if I ever upload my manga in the future, you should tell me what you think
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thus reminds me of mlp because there s 6 elements of harmany
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Love the cover, but the comic is kinda gory- for me.
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Yes. This one.
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Sheltie please tell me are you going to do page 30 and page 5 on the second chapter I have to know what happens nextΒ Β
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I want an great fan of yourse so awesome is it
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they look like super heroes... but it's kind of cool. I'm making a journal entry series about a wolf.
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Thank you!
I a bit intended to draw them like super heroes.
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Gonna enjoy it. NEW FAN IS HERE OF YOUR COMIC.
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I really love this comic! You are amazing at drawing wolves!
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I love you comic I love Spiritual Stone title I love wolf
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