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Published: 2010-02-06 02:51:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 1066; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 18
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Epic fanart for Jukashi's comic Keychain of Creation . This took me.... well, forever, felt like
From top to bottom:
Forgotten Flame of Endless Years (Daybreak Abyssal)
King of Uncloaked Steel (Dusk Abyssal, I think), Yi (Battles Sidereal), Resonance Ben (Midnight Abyssal)
Sonorous Aria (godblood), Elegant Nova of Progression (Orichalcum Alchemical)
Racer (Full Moon Lunar)
[No name given yet] (Journey Sidereal, likely), Karen (Dawn Solar)
Thrice-Radiant Misho (Twilight Solar of the First Age)
Marena the Red Crescent (Changing Moon Lunar), Misho (Twilight Solar), Secret (Day Abyssal), Ten Winds (Air Dragon-Blood)
Jukashi.... you have a lot of characters. I wanted to put the Fair Folk on here, but... man, I ran out of steam!
Keychain of Creation and its characters are Jukashi's
Exalted is White Wolf's
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Very awesome, looks like it must've taken ages. I like Flame and Karen the best of the lot
I too am willing to give anatomy pointers if you'd like. And point out where you're already doing well, of course
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It... -did- take ages!
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In the spirit of constructive critique, then, I have noticed that you tend to draw very narrow shoulders, which can also lead to narrow torsos. It's clear from the less clothe-ed characters here (Secret, for example) that you've got the parts down- neck's good, armpit/booby area is generally spot on, etc.- it's just the proportions between them that can be a bit skewed. I'm not an expert, but I found a [link] with a few anatomy rules about the shoulder area (and some other stuff I didn't entirely read) that might help.
That said, I've always admired that you keep challenging yourself in terms of composition, poses, backgrounds... I should really take a page from your book and try to be a bit more varied when posing my characters ^__^;
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Thanks hun 
Thanks for the help!
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I like the feel you were going for and the colors and such! You've really improved since you first started posting your stuff. 
If you'd like I could leave some anatomy pointers that might help you in future projects, since there's always room for further improvement.
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Yeah, I'm dissatisfied with this even since I posted it. There's so much that I can see that I know I could do better already. Feel free to critique... but be kind. I know which parts are bad. Also my feelings are like butterflies.
Also thank you
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Tell you what, hon, I'll make up a tutorial-type thing today and post it when I'm done, that might be easier.
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Hehe, thanks! I have been working like, a week on this.
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