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I wish she was a bit more to the right, but oh well..Related content
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It's as if she's flying a little above the ground, great job, I like the shadow lines.
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i love your leading lines- i see why you might've wished she was a little more right, but it's great that you caught her in mid-air. texture of the ground is cool as well
*high five*
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Art is subjective.
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I can see what you mean, but it is a minor thing. Great that you captured her so well in her movement.
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Uber.com, a website building platform for the artisticly inclined, has shut its virtual doors.
I always find the neatest sites when they have
shut down....
Anyways, congrats on the DD, I love the look of the
lines in your photo...
M
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Wonderful shot!
Great angle of capture and beautiful BW!
congratulations on your DD!
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A Daily Deviation.
FAQ #61: What is a Daily Deviation?
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how could I get it?
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how to get on Daily Deviant? haha
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you have to wait till someone suggests a work from you.
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hehe. Thanks for the reply. I appreciate it.
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A very nice composition and I think she's positioned nicely where she is! Nice gray scale gives a good mood! Excellent piece and congratulations on the DD!
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momen ajaib, suka bgt komposisinya... saya fav yah...
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asik ah...semua element dalam fotomu ini menarik...
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om bole diceritain itu foto critain apaan...
ga ngeh nee.. ^^
btw kalo street photograph itu nomer 1 moment ya??
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cerita? nggak ada cerita obyektif di sini, kamu sendiri yg bisa nyusun cerita versimu. secara gamblang, foto ini ya hanya seperti yg kamu liat, "seorang gadis kecil yg tengah berlari di lapangan berpasir, dengan beberapa bangku taman bundar dan seseorang yg sedang membersihkan sampah di sana" that's it. yg bikin aku tertarik pertama kali sebenernya bangkuΒ² itu dan garisΒ² bayangan yg ada di tanah. setelah kukomposisi secara maksimal, terasa masih ada elemen yg kurang... jadi kutunggu sampe ada orang yg tepat lewat di satu titik yg kuinginkan di komposisi tadi, sampe akhirnya dapet anak kecil ini. dan kebetulan dapet momen di mana kedua kaki dia lagi di udara, I like it. cuma idealnya sih posisi dia lebih ke kanan lagi, biar kepalanya nggak "nempel" ke bangku taman di belakangnya.
kalo dibilang yg nomer 1 di street itu momen... ya, momen emang (seringkali) penting, tapi nggak bisa tanpa mengabaikan elemen lain seperti komposisi, angle, dan halΒ² teknis seperti exposure dll. momen bagus tapi banyak elemen nggak penting masuk frame, kan akhirnya momen bagus itu tadi juga jadi tersamar to?
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o iyaaa makasiii masukannya..
sabtu ni gw maw street hunting moga moga dapet dah.. smuanya... ^^
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nice photo. i agree on your correction. even better to see that you're strict with your expectations for a good photo.
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gotta maintain the high standard, we're going to apply to those fancy photo agencies, remember?
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ha, yes. how could i forget. we're just used to deliver good work to your agents in nyc, london and tokyo, huh.
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Amazing work! I love how you compose your shots 
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I actually registered an Uber account some time ago, but never got around to upload anything to it. But I guess that would change now, since I'm going to participate in that Uber street photo competition. Currently editing my photos to be uploaded to the site, and selecting which one to submit to the competition. Don't think I'm gonna make another blog there though, I'm already lazy enough to maintain my current one.
But anyway, thanks for your appreciation and suggestion!
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great composition and all those lines on the ground make the picture even more interesting. good job!
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masih kurang juga 3 garis finish.. memang semangatnya..
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tinggal tambah oldig genangan air di bawahnya ya
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bayangan anak kecil itu kaya bayangan seekor kijang
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haha, yg di sebelah kiri kepala sama tanduknya ya. didn't notice that
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ajibbb.... bisa terbang......
garis-garis itu..... ah entahlah......
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