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ShrubSparrow — Team Rowanberry M8 Part 4
Published: 2013-04-10 18:51:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 4582; Favourites: 58; Downloads: 17
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This...
This part is now out. It's been in my head in so long... and it's finally... I'm so happy I could cry, but I think I cried enough while writing and drawing this. I never though it would be so emotionally draining. I'm not sure what to say. I'm pretty out of words by this point. But I sincerely hope you enjoyed reading it.
Next part will be the last one! c:
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Man, this page was just so depressing. Chloe sure had to deal with a lot of emotional stress at such a young age. And it really had a heavy influence on her in the present. She is very lucky to have someone like Myra there for her.
Double evolution, all the way, across the sky! What does it mean? *gets smacked*
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Yeah, that's true. She had her own way of coping, but she also ended up bottling up her emotions. But don't be depressed, heavy stuff is already in the past~ At least this turn out for the better for Chloe on this page. n_n
Hahaha, oh my god it is a double evolution!! It's so bright! xD
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It's been a while since I felt this strongly while reading something. You did a great job on this part.
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Wah, thank you! I'm honored I could make you feel that strongly! I'm happy it pays off to invest a lot of my emotions to this comic and people can relate to them.
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I wish her mom didn't say that, it would have been better for everyone if she was more forgiving.. T___T
hOMG is that... are they...?!!
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It wasn't really just her mom throwing her dad (omg I really need to actually decide their names, haha) out, it was more like a mutual agreement that the couldn't go on. Chloe's dad was a really proud personality, and he couldn't stand the thought of being near Chloe knowing he failed her. Chloe's mom didn't exactly forbid him for ever coming back or anything. Maybe there's another reason for why he never visited... or not. Who knows?
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Oh that makes sense, I wish he would come back eventually someday ;_; and everyone would move on, But I won't keep my hopes up
If there is a reason he never visited I hope you show us!
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Yeah, I want to do a couple of short comics to conclude this side of the story for a while... Then later at some point I can hopefully show more of Chloe's dad too! I don't want things to be sad forever!
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Man, you say you had this planned and refined in your head for so long, and it shows! It's hard not to get wrapped up in Chloe's backstory (not to mention it being hard to not get your heart wrenched out while reading it!) The story, pacing, and crisp art really pulls it all together!
And now...shiny shiny evolution time?!
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Thank you!! <3 Yes, I'm actually quite glad it took this long so I could keep improving the scene in my head before I actually drew it. I'm really happy it all paid off!
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Aaawwww ;__;
...Sorry, I'm not sure what to say either, but I can say that you're good at giving the emotions to your readers. I like your comics more and more >w<
*goes under his blanket to hide his tears*
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Thank you very much! I'm so happy I managed to do that, it has been my intention for a while to make scenes that give people emotions. It all comes down to thoughts and emotions I have in my heart and want to tell to people. n_n But of course conveying them is tricky too.
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ALSO I CRYED. WITH MY PARENTS SITTING WITH ME. BLEH.
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Hehee, sorry about that. ^^ But I'm really happy to hear this had such a strong effect!
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I take it some certain scrolls are gonna come into use...
Awesome emotion in this one. I wish I was as good of a comic-er as you 
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Thank you so much! <3 I'm happy I had managed to improve my comic-making skills enought so I could get the emotion across in here~ I'm sure you could be just as good! For me, it helped to go through my favorite mangas and the scenes in them that made me really emotional, and study how the story was conveyed there!
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I....I can't hold back my tears ;____;
It's so wonderful <3...so...touching.
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Thank yooou! <3 I'm glad you found it touching!
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i feel sorry for celyn...
what a short life he had.......
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Yeah, I know... It felt pretty terrible that I had to make him die. ;A; But that's how it is sometimes, especially in a world where there's fierce predators everywhere.
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So that's what happened. Loss and eviction...Goodness gracious...
Beautifully excellent!
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Thank you! He wasn't completely evicted though, he just couldn't keep living with Chloe and her mom because of his broken pride... And because she couldn't forgive him.
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I am crying now... didn't suspect Chloe had such a tragic past... like Edison, from my Team Dynamo... his little sister, Teresa, died of starvation in his arms... he never had ceased to regret he was the one that survived...
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Ah, yes, it's sad that people aren't always able to cope with deaths of others very well. :< I'm glad this page made you feel that much, though! (and sorry for the late reply)
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I guess Rowanberry and Dynamo could be good friends in the future.
(No problem; thanks a lot for the answer)
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This page is beautiful- both art and story wise. Chloe and Myra's talk made me want to cry a bit, but I'm really excited for what might be coming next.
Best friends heartwarming talk about how they help each other evolution. So beautiful.
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Thank you!! <3 Ahhh I'm so happy you think that way. I wanted to give my all to this! (And sorry for such a late reply... I thought I had replied to all the comments but I manged to miss a few)
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You're welcome.
(No problem, I've been going on sporadically too).
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Yaay~ Thanks for the comment! :3
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:C so sad!!! and sad that she doesn't get to see her dad :C
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Yeah... :< Maybe they'll meet again someday. And maybe there's a reason to why he never showed up again. Who knows(wait, that should be me, right? haha).
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i hope they do!!!
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Be right back crying in a corner ;______;
Is it normal that I feel so proud of them or not ?
Wonderful mission already whaou, I don't have the words to describe all the emotions this page bringed.... Whaou...
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Ahhh sorry I made you cry, but I'm glad at the same time! 
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Oh my gosh, Chloe! I feel so sorry for her. I hope she gets to see her dad again. T_T
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Ah, yes, me too! I wonder where he disappeared to... Hmm...
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*sniff*
... but wait one second, what is this?
FRIENDSHIP HUG OF EVOLUTION!!!?
AWWWWWWW YEAAAAAAAAH, someone cue the epic music, shits about to get real.
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Wooooo~ Hehehe.
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>(; v 
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Thank you so much!! <3 I'm so happy to hear you enjoyed it! (And for your tumblr comment: hehe, no shame in tearing up, I tear up very easily watching movies or reading books/comics. I'm glad I managed to create a scene that had an impact on people!)
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ooooh! so pretty! i simply MUST do fan art for your team! i MUST! they are waaaay to cute!
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Eeeee thank you!! I'm so glad you like them! If you ever do, please let me know!
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i have! already! its one of the newest deviant ive posted on my profile!
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Aaaa, that's right! Sorry I didn't see it before!
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no need to sorry! :3 you are so kind and awesome, so of course you must be busy, so noooooo need to sorry! :3 stay awesome!
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