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Shutterflame — For You
Published: 2005-07-19 01:18:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 106; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 2
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Description A day
when I don't think
about you
is a day
when the sky
cracks
open, pouring the
sun like a yolk
into the sea.

And a night
when I don't dream
about you
is a night
when the stars burn
out
leaving the moon with
no one
to talk to.
For the moon needs stars
just like I
need you.
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Comments: 4

ortan [2005-08-18 17:50:12 +0000 UTC]

Hmmm... So pathetic and so... typical. Sorry but I don't like Your poem. Maybe because i am not a huge fan of poetry...

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Shutterflame In reply to ortan [2005-08-19 14:48:52 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for my first critical comment! I'll keep it in mind.

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Blackghost7 [2005-07-19 04:34:43 +0000 UTC]

Wow, that is nice. I wish I could write meaningful poetry like that.

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Shutterflame In reply to Blackghost7 [2005-07-19 12:04:37 +0000 UTC]

hmm, i'm surprised it sounds that meaningful...i wrote it at four in the morning when i couldn't sleep. ^_^

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