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Today was your first day of the new semester. As you walked in to school, you met your friends in the cafeteria. Once you get in there youΒ hear some one calling your name. "_____!" It was your best friend Ashley. You and Ashley have been the best of friends ever since you moved here in 4th grade. At that time you were new to public schools and didn't know where you were going. You got really lost in the school, and happened to bump in to her and you both fell backwards. After the apologies she helped you find your classes since you two had the same classes at the same time. But that was 4th grade and now you two are sophomores in high school. "Hey!" You shout over at Ashley. You go over to where she was sitting and sit down next to her. You hug her, and she hugs you back."So how was your weekend ____?" Ashley asked
"Meh, it was ok. As boring as ever. I wish my life was a little more exciting though....." You reply stretching your arms across the table and yawning. Ashley sighed.
"______ , you say that every day."
"Only because nothing ever happens. I want something strange and exciting to happen!"
"Ok miss 'I want something strange and exciting to happen' what did you have in mind this time?" You can tell that she's teasing you a little but you don't really care
"Hummm..... I WANNA MEET AN ALIEN!" You shout giving your friend one of the goofiest grins you can. You both laugh until Ashley says,"Come on goofy lets go get our new schedules." You nod and you both get up and go to the tables that have the first letter of your last name on it. You tell the woman your name, she shuffles through some papers and hand you your new schedule. You give a simple "thank you" and step out of line to go meet up with Ashley again. You compare your schedule to hers hoping to have her in at least lunch or study hall. Β You sigh in relief seeing that she's in both your lunch and study hall. The five minute bell rings telling everyone that they have five minutes to get to class. You and Ashley say good bye and go your separate ways for now.
You run down the hallway trying not to be late to the first class of the day. When you turn the corner you accidentally ran into someone, causing them and yourself to fall.
"Ow!" you say as you start to sit up. You hear a low grumble and you noticed that you crashed into someone instead of something.
"Oh my god, I'm soo sorry!!!" You apologize, picking up the papers that the person must have dropped. You collected the papers in no time since there was only a few and you handed them back to the person you knocked over. You realized that that person was boy about your age. He had raven black hair that was a little messy; probably because you just knocked him over. And very pale skin. He wore a bright red turtle neck sweater. You don't remember ever seeing him before. The boy took the papers back that you were handing him, then stood up. You followed his lead and stood up as well. Once again you apologized to the boy saying that you were really sorry but you had to get to class before you were late. You ran off to your class again and made it just in time; as soon as you got in the room the bell rang and you took your seat.
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Comments: 28
NaruhiPheles [2014-04-27 15:21:30 +0000 UTC]
Yeah..my name is Ashley
and my best frind is...Ashley XDDDD
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NaruhiPheles In reply to ashlee1068 [2014-04-27 15:22:51 +0000 UTC]
I know what you mean >
*also ashley* XDDD
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Shypony2 In reply to ashlee1068 [2014-01-13 11:41:22 +0000 UTC]
XDD well then I guess you share the same name as your best friend.Β
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Shypony2 In reply to Warriorkeroro123 [2013-07-13 04:02:30 +0000 UTC]
Wow thank you! And thank you for all the favs too!
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Warriorkeroro123 In reply to Shypony2 [2013-07-13 04:15:34 +0000 UTC]
Your 2o welcome!
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MedicinegirlAsh8 [2013-07-01 06:40:55 +0000 UTC]
This is weird because my name is Ashley.. Sharing names with your best friend? Approved. XD
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Shypony2 In reply to MedicinegirlAsh8 [2013-07-01 14:37:31 +0000 UTC]
XDD well I guess that's a good way to look at it :3
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xPrincessGirl786x [2013-06-08 15:34:19 +0000 UTC]
The Ironic Thing Is That My Best Friend's Name Really Is Ashley
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Shypony2 In reply to xPrincessGirl786x [2013-06-08 18:32:29 +0000 UTC]
lol thats awesome!
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Tasha8976 [2013-05-17 20:31:18 +0000 UTC]
Please don't take this the wrong way, your story is amazing! But, there are...so...many...mistakes... *bashes head on table* The grammar Nazi and the spelling Nazi in me are screaming right now. Other than the amount of mistakes, this is a good story. Just don't have so many run-on sentences please! :3
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Shypony2 In reply to Tasha8976 [2013-05-18 01:52:28 +0000 UTC]
Lol it's ok I know that I'm really bad with writing so I guess this is my way of getting better? But I have been trying to keep an closer eye for when I go on run-on sentences. I'm glad that you like the story though!
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prismaticHistoria [2013-05-16 19:50:43 +0000 UTC]
I really like how this sounds so far, but I did see little mistakes.
It should be;
*pale, not pail
*Alien, not ailean
*Ashley, not Ansley(although it looks more like a slip of the finger since it was spelled wrong only once)
Sorry, if I'm annoying, I just thought that I should point that out.
Can't wait to read the next chapter~
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Shypony2 In reply to prismaticHistoria [2013-05-16 21:41:13 +0000 UTC]
No your not annoying me its actually very helpful so thank you! Honestly I'm a terrible speller and this would look like a bomb of spelling mistakes hit it if I wasn't on my tablet writing it.
I'm glad that you liked it and I hope you keep reading and continue liking it!
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prismaticHistoria In reply to Shypony2 [2013-05-16 22:41:30 +0000 UTC]
Okay, good. I was afraid I might annoy you. I know the feeling, I'm not the best speller either, but I am working on it and it just takes practice, right~?
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Shypony2 In reply to prismaticHistoria [2013-05-16 23:05:38 +0000 UTC]
Haha that's right!!
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Viczen101 [2013-05-16 12:34:30 +0000 UTC]
"here" not "hear"
Great story, cant wait to read more~!
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Shypony2 In reply to Viczen101 [2013-05-16 21:42:23 +0000 UTC]
Ok thanks! I really appreciate it
I'm so glad that you like it!
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Ewa-Bednarz [2013-05-16 09:07:04 +0000 UTC]
I want to meet an alien but i have no idea how lucky i am
and its "fell backwards", not "fell back words"
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Shypony2 In reply to Ewa-Bednarz [2013-05-16 09:33:29 +0000 UTC]
Yah ikr but we but believe in our imaginations!!!
Oh thank you ill fix it right away then : )
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herecomestroublr [2013-05-16 03:08:25 +0000 UTC]
omg this is awesome
but its stood. not stud. that what weird guys call themselves
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Shypony2 In reply to herecomestroublr [2013-05-16 10:10:16 +0000 UTC]
Yay I'm glad you liked it! I'm gonna try and post the next update today if I finish it
Oh thank you ill fix it ASAP (sometimes I can't spell even the simplest of words : P)
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herecomestroublr In reply to Shypony2 [2013-05-16 14:27:14 +0000 UTC]
OKAY~!
Yeah, it happens to everybody
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Shypony2 In reply to gingerale02 [2013-05-16 01:31:13 +0000 UTC]
haha thanks ill try my best!
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