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siemingly β Just Ignore the Smoke and Smile
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Published: 2018-03-27 19:00:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 404; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 0
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I would like to start off with how this really captured my eye! I think you did really good on the smoke, it really adds to the painting! The overall coloring is very good as well. I particularly like the blue, its one of my favorite shades! I think that drip effect is really good, it must have taken some time to do that! Just as a suggestion, The drip thats coming down seems a bit to analytical compared to when it hits the body. It doesn't look wrong, but I would suggest making it more expressive. Also, I think the face looks really good in structure, but I think the jaw is at the wrong angle to be looking up. Its a very difficult angle to get, and the rest of the face lines up perfectly, but the jaw line I think needs to curve up a little more. Overall, you did really awesome. ^-^
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Oh wow, thanks a lot!
I actually accidentally turned on the critique option but I greatly appreciate the feedback nonetheless!Β
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Oh no! In that case, I hope I didn't upset you in any way! π Β
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You didn't! The things you pointed out were things I was actually
skeptical about myself, I had never really experimented with them
before so I was pretty awkward with them. Like I said I greatly
appreciated it, as a matter of fact! : D
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