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Silentshadows β€” Sometimes
Published: 2004-05-16 00:37:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 155; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 6
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Description Sometimes….

When I see your smile,
I long to kiss your tender
Lips, how my heart beats.

My heart thunders your
Name, I feel in my throat.
Stomach tied in knots.

If I were to lean
And embrace your lips in mine
Would you allow me?
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Comments: 14

Runewitch [2004-05-16 12:53:33 +0000 UTC]

nicelly put

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Silentshadows In reply to Runewitch [2004-05-16 12:56:35 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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Runewitch In reply to Silentshadows [2004-05-16 13:07:48 +0000 UTC]

you're most welcome

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CupCake23 [2004-05-16 02:07:00 +0000 UTC]

I think this is really great

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Silentshadows In reply to CupCake23 [2004-05-16 02:09:09 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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CupCake23 In reply to Silentshadows [2004-05-16 02:12:28 +0000 UTC]

No problemo

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Silentshadows In reply to CupCake23 [2004-05-16 02:14:49 +0000 UTC]

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ahmose [2004-05-16 01:55:04 +0000 UTC]

i don't normally care for haiku, but this one is extremely good, very well done.

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Silentshadows In reply to ahmose [2004-05-16 02:06:58 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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ahmose In reply to Silentshadows [2004-05-16 02:31:36 +0000 UTC]

anytime

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etherealtwilight [2004-05-16 01:47:34 +0000 UTC]

wow...that was really good!!!

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Silentshadows In reply to etherealtwilight [2004-05-16 02:06:24 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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ragingmonkey310 [2004-05-16 00:39:48 +0000 UTC]

HAIKU!!! OMG ITS BEEN A LONG TIEM SENSE I READ A GOOD HAIKU!!!

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Silentshadows In reply to ragingmonkey310 [2004-05-16 00:44:22 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, and to have it called good as well. There's more on the site than this one.

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