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silentstarelly — Miles From You, pt. 1
Published: 2011-09-28 04:45:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 624; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 10
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Part 1 of a new manip I'm making. Part two is here: [link]Together + lyrics [link]
Please critique this!! I know it's not perfect, and I would love to know what I did wrong so I can start learning how to do it right.
Ok, so here's what I've got so far for critiques:
- hair shading is off (hair in back should be darker because it's not in direct sunlight)
- shading on dress is off (doesn't match the light source)
- patch of clear sky looks a bit weird (maybe make it smaller?)
What do you guys think about these?^ Agree? Disagree?
Girl: [link] by and [link] by
Background: [link] by , [link] by and [link] by by
Ribbon: [link] by
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Comments: 17
I love the red in this picture... It really jut draws my eyes
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Thank you! I like it too.
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Hiyas! Your art has been featured here: [link]
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I am in awe. but to comment as you would like the hair shading is the only real glaring thing once you really look. the shading on the dress is fine, a bit out of the ordinary but good nonetheless. keep the clear sky! omg makes the picture flow STUPENDOUSLY and the mountains are beautiful, i wish they were a bit higher rez but hey. beautiful compilation. great job
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Ok, so I know what I will be changing first chance I get!
Actually, I purposely made the mountains a bit fuzzy since they're in the background and I wanted the girl to draw more attention.
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perfect! aaaand i should get this pic as a tattoo. lol
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oh dear and if i did i DOO have the perfect tattoo dude for it too....
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She is
Although, actually, she's made of two people.
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Ohh okay XD Well, they're still pretty.
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Es preciosa,muy bonita,a primera vista no se sabe si es foto real!
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