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Ref. photo by GloomWriter [link]This wanted to be Eowyn and Eomer, or anyone else from Rohan, but I'm not satisfied. Not at all. And I have to do something with the background, but I hate backgrounds...
I would appreciate constructive comments!
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I'd say you're off to a great start so far. My criticisms aren't too big, but I hope they're of some help. Eowyn's head looks a little big, and its position is, for lack of a better word, weird. Her horse also looks a little on the small side. She's not a very big girl, so she'd need a horse that looks huge (or IS huge, to accentuate how small she really is). Second, Eomer also looks a little big for his horse. His legs and hips are fine, but he seems a little too top-heavy.
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Thank you very much for the constructive comment!
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Just sayin'.
Anyways, this is amazing! I don't know what you mean about not being satisfied. XD Rubbish. The horses are absolutely beautiful! I love how you shade their fur. Their anatomy is always perfect!
You definitely should add a background. The perspective seems off without one.
As for crit, I think that Eomer's horse's left foot and leg looks a bit strange, almost like the area by the pastern is too thick. Eowyn's saddle looks a sort of weird, toom like it's sitting up too high or something. That might just be because I'm so used to English saddles, though.
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Thank you very much! 
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No problem! 
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I like it a lot!
(I'd probably make Eowyn's horse a bit bigger, but, well, it's maybe because I like big horses 
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You're right, I'll try to correct it!
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The girl looks wrong. Her head is larger than her waist! And her hips and legs aren't big enough for the rest of her. Her face is good, but I'm not sure about her hair, it would depend of whether there is any wind.
Would she really be wearing man's clothing and not riding in some sort of female riding attire?
Hm, I hope this was constructive. I sure meant it to be.
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Thank you very much for the critics! You helped a lot!
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This looks great! I can't wait to see if finished.
I'm terrible at coming up with backgrounds 
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Thank you for the comment!
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So I would first say that the people look a bit large for the horses, but I know how hard it is to draw riders on horses so I won't bug you too much. XD I don't think it needs a real detailed background, maybe just some shades?
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Thanks for the comment! They're too big, true.
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A rajzolt verzióid jobbak mint az eredeti fotó. Ebben van valami érdekes és van benne koncepció. CSak azért mert egy ló ágaskodik attól még kár a gőzért - attól még nem lesz jó fotó. Ráadásul a rajzaid annyival is többek hogy van rajta emberi figura, és ráadásul nem gombnyomásra...
Grat!!!
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I think it's amazing Kata, I love the mane on the blonde horse!
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It's beautiful, but to add backgrounds is a good idea.
Great job, I like your horses!
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Riders of Rohan! What news in the Riddermark?
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Nagyon köszönöm a konstruktív hozzászólást!
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I can only wish you good luck, because the background is very important part of the picture. Your work is great, but with BG it'll be excellent!
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I know it is, and I've some ideas alredy. Thank you for the comment!
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