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Hihihi. I'm strange!
Okay, I know this should probably go to scraps... But I felt inspired to put it in my normal gallery (because I can put it in the game fanart category).
Small comic including Roxas, Axel and an OC (she's not a nobody). This idea came up when my sister and I were discussing my fanfiction and this is what came up (small summary: after KH2 the nobodies get a new chance and build up their org. XIII again, to find another way to get hearts. But as some members decide that they would like to go their own ways for an undefined time and Xemnas thinks org. X sounds stupid he has to get three new members... It's a comedy not to be taken seriously because I normally don't like OCs that much and OC-girls getting into Org. XIII also has a lot of... Mary-Sue potential... Which I don't like... Anyway. Back to the pic).
Pheni (short form of her real name) is one of the three girls (Org. XIII is laking girls...) joining the Organisation. Bad thing; she's not a nobody and she just wanted to learn the superior art of tea-making from Xehanort (insider joke...) but Ansem directed her to Xemnas. So my sis and I were thinking about her abilities and we both thought that she was causing a gloomy mood whereever she went and that's the outcome.
Axel likes Roxas, Roxas thinks he needs more privacy (he's 17 then) and wants to get rid of the constant Axel-glomping so he gets the girl who 'scares' Axel away (upon being touched by her depressing atmosphere he gets the feeling that he never will have a chance with Roxas and the boy will never love him. Well. He's got no heart after all... Btw remark; in our FF Axel is not a nobody so he does have a heart and can fall madly in love with the younger boy)

... I'm talking too much, I don't think anyone actually cares about this X3 (well my sister does so I have to write it down, as long as one person is interested I can't stop)

Okay that's it.
Comments and Critique welcome

Axel and Roxas (c) Disney / Squareenix
Pheni (c) by me (my sister has problems remembering and pronouncing her name, so I just keep it short)

EDIT:
Okay, here goes the translation of what's being talked. Fear my bad translation skills!! (And just ignore any mistakes, 'kay?? ) ... well there isn't much to translate anyway...

1. Panel (read from left to right) Axel: ROXAS! (wow...)
2. Panel Roxas: *shock*
3. Panel Pheni: Heh? (great translation... Btw Roxas is using a dark-window thingy the members always travel with to get Pheni out of whereever she was before)
4. Panel All: ...
5. Panel (finally the actuall translation): Axel: *sob* It's useless anyway! He will NEVER love me!!
Pheni: *thinking* how cruel, Roxas...

That's it. Not really funny! X3 Go me and my senseless translations...

Description
Hihihi. I'm strange!
Okay, I know this should probably go to scraps... But I felt inspired to put it in my normal gallery (because I can put it in the game fanart category).
Small comic including Roxas, Axel and an OC (she's not a nobody). This idea came up when my sister and I were discussing my fanfiction and this is what came up (small summary: after KH2 the nobodies get a new chance and build up their org. XIII again, to find another way to get hearts. But as some members decide that they would like to go their own ways for an undefined time and Xemnas thinks org. X sounds stupid he has to get three new members... It's a comedy not to be taken seriously because I normally don't like OCs that much and OC-girls getting into Org. XIII also has a lot of... Mary-Sue potential... Which I don't like... Anyway. Back to the pic).
Pheni (short form of her real name) is one of the three girls (Org. XIII is laking girls...) joining the Organisation. Bad thing; she's not a nobody and she just wanted to learn the superior art of tea-making from Xehanort (insider joke...) but Ansem directed her to Xemnas. So my sis and I were thinking about her abilities and we both thought that she was causing a gloomy mood whereever she went and that's the outcome.
Axel likes Roxas, Roxas thinks he needs more privacy (he's 17 then) and wants to get rid of the constant Axel-glomping so he gets the girl who 'scares' Axel away (upon being touched by her depressing atmosphere he gets the feeling that he never will have a chance with Roxas and the boy will never love him. Well. He's got no heart after all... Btw remark; in our FF Axel is not a nobody so he does have a heart and can fall madly in love with the younger boy)

... I'm talking too much, I don't think anyone actually cares about this X3 (well my sister does so I have to write it down, as long as one person is interested I can't stop)

Okay that's it.
Comments and Critique welcome

Axel and Roxas (c) Disney / Squareenix
Pheni (c) by me (my sister has problems remembering and pronouncing her name, so I just keep it short)

EDIT:
Okay, here goes the translation of what's being talked. Fear my bad translation skills!! (And just ignore any mistakes, 'kay?? ) ... well there isn't much to translate anyway...

1. Panel (read from left to right) Axel: ROXAS! (wow...)
2. Panel Roxas: *shock*
3. Panel Pheni: Heh? (great translation... Btw Roxas is using a dark-window thingy the members always travel with to get Pheni out of whereever she was before)
4. Panel All: ...
5. Panel (finally the actuall translation): Axel: *sob* It's useless anyway! He will NEVER love me!!
Pheni: *thinking* how cruel, Roxas...

That's it. Not really funny! X3 Go me and my senseless translations...