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Original: [link]Some things to work on...
- Your collarbone placement. They're not just lines you can put anywhere ^^
- The poofy hair. This is easily fixed by just doing a quick guideline of a bald head underneath. It helps you keep it in check.
-The boob thing is something many people have trouble with. Hopefully my notes help
- And lastly... please please please try to draw the hands and body more! I can't really help you without seeing where you need the help.
Anyway, hope that helped.
Final note: I have trouble lately keeping my shoulders in check. Please be aware her left shoulder sticks out a bit too much. I'm still learning as well~
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Silver-Solace [2011-04-11 21:23:41 +0000 UTC]
Another great correction! I really enjoy reading yours Nice pointers!
lol I have shoulder issues at times too xD; I don't think her left shoulder is all that noticeable though. I didn't see it until you pointed it out.
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sillyapple In reply to Silver-Solace [2011-04-11 22:05:01 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much!
Yeah, it's tricky. The shoulders looked fine until I finally colored them and saw that they were a bit off. Sometimes you just notice too late :<
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Silver-Solace In reply to sillyapple [2011-04-11 23:55:53 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome! ^^
True that! lol I wonder why that is? Noticing mistakes when coloring I mean. It sucks even more when that happen with traditional pieces OTL
About the shoulder thing though, it's something I used to do all the time before I learned anatomy. And now I'm doing it again (among other things) lol. That's what I get for not drawing enough.
Oh and I LOVE YOUR ICON :'D
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AKAluck [2011-04-11 21:16:26 +0000 UTC]
good work with the correction. I have to practice a lot the shoulders area too. Can you tell me where did you find the references you used up there?
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sillyapple In reply to AKAluck [2011-04-11 21:59:09 +0000 UTC]
Of course. I just googled 'strapless dresses' on image search, and I found these two: [link] [link]
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AKAluck In reply to sillyapple [2011-04-12 20:41:30 +0000 UTC]
They're really good for practicing ^^ Thanks a lot
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