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Chapter 8 of Werewolf Tale 2.
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And with a new chapter, new updates.
- Shadow-Wolf has finished the cover for Werewolf Tale. It will be posted within her gallery and mine close to the time when the completed work will be available for purchase, or maybe sooner. I'm still in awe of the final result, and my thanks go to her for all her hard work.
- I am now listed as an author on Goodreads.com. There aren't any blogs, pictures or such that I have posted in my profile yet, but it will be updated when Werewolf Tale's release date gets close. (Author's Page - www.goodreads.com/author/show/β¦
- My copy-editor has looked over the FurAffinity draft of Werewolf Tale, and once the last of my payments to her has been finalized, I will start working on the final draft. (I'm looking into a comic artist I know via Twitter to help with placement of the rear blurb text.)
Chapter 9 is coming along, and I'm working out plots as well.
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It certainly is good, much better than any of my writing. The way you added the moon phase is rather cool. This is original as far as I cam see. The way you made things realistic by not being able to use a phone early on is wonderful. I could tell from just the first page that this would be good, and I was correct on that guess You have a real talent for writing. The paragraphs could be a little better, they seemed written like an essay, which is boring but practical. I rated you slightly lower because of that, only 1/2 a star though. It could be improved a lot, you could remind the reader what happened sometimes. It would also help those that skip ahead to random chapters understand what is going on, just don't do that to much. I know this entire series is likely great, if I can find the next chapter I will read it.
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Thanks for the critique. I appreciate it.
Essay-style writing is likely my college English years working with my editing style. That and I'm not a fan of excess prose for general use, but I'll keep that observation in mind. (You're the first person who has mentioned that to me.)
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I may not be in college yet (Only being 10th grade) but I can tell when I see an essay like writing style. It is organised, very well, but it brings back some bad memories of nearly not completing essays I had to write. Other than that, it was really great.
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Thanks. If I ever decide to do a work based around medieval record keepers, or to use a Thief example from the first three games, The Keepers, my current style may line right up with the idea.
And I know that feeling pretty well. Got it during my degree program exit course sometimes.
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It is not a problem, when I see something interesting, I check it out and see what it is. If I like it, I'll stay there or get it if I can buy it. If I can't, I'll compliment whoever made or did that.
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Hey! Nice to see something from you again! I can't wait to see that cover!
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It'll be worth the wait, I can assure you.
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Then I'll be keeping my eyes peeled! Thanks!
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Looks like Eski beat me to it. The front cover was posted on her gallery today.
www.deviantart.com/art/Werewolβ¦
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