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I've noticed that you've let some of your Brit slang find its way into your comics. Intentional? If not, might be something to be wary of.
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Haha well hopefully its meaning is clear even if you haven't heard the words 'lanky' and 'bag' put together like that before 
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English isn't my language, so I had never heard the word "mould" before...
No problem whatsoever with some characters speaking British/Irish/whatever slang, as long as
1. it's well done, and
2. it's googleable
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Ohh I hadn't even thought that might be the problem word! Mould is just the American word 'mold' with a 'u' added, us Brits just like putting u's in as many words as possible
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Why? There's a wiki for British time ya know.
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I shouldn't need to find a wiki to understand a comic. You gotta' think about who's reading your comic. It's a well-known fact that 99.22% of the world's population is not British.
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Not everything in the world needs to be culturally harmonised, standardised and sanitised down to the lowest common denominator. It's perfectly fine to write in British English, for goodness' sake.
Sorry, but I rather strongly hold to the view that people shouldn't feel the need to simplify or weaken their work simply to tailor it to the broadest possible audience.
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I appreciate the sentiment mate
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I think you took it a little too seriously. 
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Oh, OK. It's difficult to tell sometimes…
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Well, I was tired when I wrote that. In hindsight, an emote or two probably would have helped convey my intent better.
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So you never look up Anime jokes? I had to allot growing up. I mean some of it was a simple transition: nose bleeds and flash fainting but there were many I didn't get till I hot the Internet.
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Relax, I was only joking.
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XD Sorry I love to lecture and debate. I talk with one of my Exes specifically case she does too. Ahhh clever, clever cat boy. 
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I wouldn't go around commenting about the smell of someone who is fifty times bigger than you
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I hope for your sake you never meet anyone who is that much bigger than you anyway!
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but, what if it's just a giant gummy bear? I can easily eat my way out of him
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She is the mould obviously. >o>
... Least that's why I figured her hair was a dull grey anyway. >x>
It is good she has such manners. Would hate it if she turned out to be rude or something.
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Just long straggly strings of moss growing from her head 
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Haha Haha XD comedy gold as always and I like this tiny elf already! XD hahaha
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*predicting that Tarryn will have nice long friendship with the little elf that she saved* "which one is you and which one is the cave, Lank-bag" *immediatly changes prediction to the Elf is so freaking dead*
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No lovely touching friendship stories here!
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I feel like I'm going to feel bad for Tarynn even more now
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I don't see the little elf surviving very long after this... Tarryn's got a pretty short fuse as it is and adding insult to injury just might overwhelm what little racial loyalty she might have.
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Well let's see how much heat that fuse can take shall we?
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Yup, first the bushy haired fairy and now her! Not a great day for Tarynn...
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SimonLorimers A Series of Unfortunate Events!
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Haha glad to keep you on your toes!
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