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Not even when she tries to look serene does she ever catch a break xD, I'm wondering what she'll do next because this little elf must have some metal ovaries to say that infront of Tarryn xD
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Haha well she wouldn't be Tarynn if she ever caught a break! Thanks for the comment
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holy crap..where the heck if this elf from?!, "oh hello giant thats not trying to eat me ..fuk u and you smell!
unless shes suicidal or some super ninja..i cant imagine where she musters this level of not caring 
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She's from the Youtube comments section obviously! 
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oh wow, what a rude Elf. XD You'd think she'd be grateful for not being eaten. XD No-one appreciates poor Tarynn.
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Not in Tarynn's world!
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Bleeeh, I still say she needs a friend. You're making me want to write a non-cannon thing where she either runs into my own Elf, who is much nicer then her current one, or my Naga, Tessa. XD
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Tarryn kill her do it! let the hate flow through you strike her down and your assentation to the darkside will be complete!
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Haha the force is strong with this one!
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Pfffaahahahaa XD
Poor Tarynn
Very nice job
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Haha thank you very much!
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And so Tarynn's already made a new friend!
Anyway, love this one to death. I know I always point out how fantastically expressive your characters are, but maybe if you'd stop being so good at that, I'd stop having to repeat myself. 
Well done as usual, you talented fiend you!
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And what a beautiful friendship it is
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Haha evidently not, unless someone else wrote those words for you!
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Oh, that is so not fair… And that little elf seems to be lacking something known as "survival instinct".
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Haha well she is the visual walking equivalent of the whole red tent concept after all!
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Damn- not only did she shatter Tarynn's 'charm' mask, but also broke it so hard she turned her face into that of a Redead from Zelda at the same time! Suffice to say, that got me to laugh, a lot at how quickly that face of hers changed hehe XD. But wow, that elf...sure wasn't expecting THAT kind of behavior (though, I wasn't sure what to expect to begin with heh), she seems to possibly know that giant elves 'normally' don't eat smaller ones I suppose... unfortunately for Tarynn here 
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Haha those things are damn creepy!
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Haha she certainly has a way with words doesn't she?
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Haha thank you for the comment!
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Very insightful comment, wasn't it?
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I'd repremand the tiny elf for tempting fate but it's Tarynn we're talking about so she should be safe
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Haha yeah, fate has never been Tarynn's friend, on Facebook or otherwise
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Yup, just goes to show being a giant racist has its drawbacks!
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Also a murderous giant racist, but I seem to be in the minority on that opinion.
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Well then you're in a minority with me too! She's definitely going to end up somewhere hot and brimstoney in the afterlife, I just hope her story is interesting for the nonce 
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Not necessarily. Apparently heaven is very lenient towards all these behaviors. Oh well. Just one more thing my characters will need to address.
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Now that would make a good book!
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XD Oooh she's rude and bold? She won't last long Mr thinks. XD Her mannerisms and features remind me of my rude human OC Kate Lowe though... And so far she's survived... Maybe the little Elf will last. >. > Maybe.
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Haha well we'll have to wait to see!
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Be safe over there in cusp-of-apocalypse-land over there...
Also, smooth on the charm there, Tarryn. XD
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Hey, there's no more thrilling a way to live your life than on the brink of destruction!
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You're welcome! Though I am at least glad to see things haven't gone over the cliff for you out there, at least just yet.
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Tarynn, the Rodney Dangerfield of Felarya...NO RESPECT, I tellz ya!
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