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Published: 2006-01-26 15:41:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 72; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Description "We haven't known each other long enough"
a simple answer
to the complex
and now I know I'll never be
             publicly
able to
but you like me too much
so maybe
            "shouldn't"
means
            "but I want you to"(no)
long enough
   2 1/2
not long enough
    I'm fine
        lovely.
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Comments: 6

metacognition [2006-02-19 03:08:31 +0000 UTC]

favorite

that's all that needs to be said

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simplytears In reply to metacognition [2006-02-19 05:41:59 +0000 UTC]

I can't believe that you like this one best! I'm not terribly fond of it. I'm not sure I like the way I wrote it. I also have some bad feelings about the entire subject matter. Eh. One man's trash is another man's treasure! I'm glad you like it. thanks for the fav!

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Lecco [2006-01-26 19:59:40 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha, the sexual undertones in this are really funny...even though the 2 and a half weeks/months things refers to time together and it not being long enough to have sex, it does sound like it refers to penis size. "2 and a half, not long enough, I'm fine, lovely." Hahahaha, it made me laugh, even though I know that that wasn't your intention.

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simplytears In reply to Lecco [2006-01-26 21:11:04 +0000 UTC]

ha ha except that that isn't what it refers to.

good guess tho. I like your interpretation.

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Lecco In reply to simplytears [2006-01-27 03:25:37 +0000 UTC]

I know it doesn't. But it makes me laugh anywho.

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simplytears In reply to Lecco [2006-01-27 04:15:16 +0000 UTC]

me too. I'm glad that I can laugh at my poem.

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