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Published: 2008-04-19 03:06:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 1932; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 23
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Starting up the new OC comic based off ofCollege Chaos by
All your Charries
The Dragonball
and a few ideas of my own.
Its Yola Briefs first day at Shenron High, a school for young Aliens, Super beings, and freaks from all over the universe.
Yola has come to Shenron after finding she had latent super human abilities and to help hone them as well as keep up with her education she has come here. She is being led around by Arta, a senior saiyan girl who probably could care less about helping.
So begins another project, if you like it try and help me stay motivated with helpful hints, comments, favs, and anything else you can think of.
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's Arta
's Momack
's Gum
's Blade
's Kurrat
and Yola is mine.
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Comments: 111
Sipioc In reply to ??? [2008-04-21 02:32:51 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, I appreciate that. She is sure to met some friendly faces in the near future
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Sipioc In reply to Harem-Hippie [2008-04-21 04:22:48 +0000 UTC]
But of course,
She wishes Hotaru to be under protection against her will, shielded in her father's sense but caged in her own sense. In other words we will have session's in which she tries to ditch her body guard and do something exciting.
Question though...
Does she have feelings for him first,
He for her?
Or do they both have a mutual attraction that they hide right off the bat?
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Sipioc In reply to Harem-Hippie [2008-04-21 20:28:20 +0000 UTC]
Hide them from each other as well?
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Sipioc In reply to Harem-Hippie [2008-04-22 21:50:03 +0000 UTC]
Good, thats what I had in mind...
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joeyluxton In reply to ??? [2008-04-20 21:49:08 +0000 UTC]
Awsome!! Arta doesn't look too pleased Great job dude
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DragonballXE In reply to ??? [2008-04-20 06:35:49 +0000 UTC]
and so it begins! xD
looks great so far man ^_^
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Supersaiyanbatman In reply to ??? [2008-04-20 02:09:05 +0000 UTC]
Cool, though maybe you should decorate the outside of the school a bit
just my opinion
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Sipioc In reply to Supersaiyanbatman [2008-04-20 18:52:00 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, detail would be a nice touch, note to self in the near future.
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Sipioc In reply to hyperdark06 [2008-04-19 22:29:08 +0000 UTC]
I plan to, lets hope I do, I should
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cromas In reply to ??? [2008-04-19 16:08:39 +0000 UTC]
can't wait for more from this comic dude
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Haohmaru77 [2008-04-19 13:46:43 +0000 UTC]
Looks very good indeed. Interesting!
I must tell you, however, I'm not so fond of the two panels showing Shenron high... They look kinda... plain if you ask me. I'd suggest you add some shades to give 'em a 3d shape, that's all.
It's cool overall, I hope you keeps it up~
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Sipioc In reply to Haohmaru77 [2008-04-19 22:28:42 +0000 UTC]
Yeah to be completely honest I know what you mean, I made them using Powerpoint and Paint tools.
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Haohmaru77 In reply to Sipioc [2008-04-19 23:16:10 +0000 UTC]
Ahh, I see... Well, it's ok. ^^
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Sipioc In reply to Haohmaru77 [2008-04-19 23:17:40 +0000 UTC]
Yeah but it could have been done better, I am no good at backgrounds, I lack the patience to do them well
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Haohmaru77 In reply to Sipioc [2008-04-20 00:33:41 +0000 UTC]
Have you tried doing them with traditional media? It might look better since you're using it for the rest of the page. ^^
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Sipioc In reply to Haohmaru77 [2008-04-20 18:48:06 +0000 UTC]
Thats true, tell you what from here on in thats what I will try
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Haohmaru77 In reply to Sipioc [2008-04-21 13:02:28 +0000 UTC]
Cool. I'm sure that'll look better!
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DaGeneral [2008-04-19 11:15:04 +0000 UTC]
Eee!
Great job Sip, I love it so far!
Poor Yola...I wouldn't wanna get stuck with Arta as a guide.
Wonder why she's abandoning her so early...
Great work!
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Sipioc In reply to DaGeneral [2008-04-19 22:27:36 +0000 UTC]
A possible sub plot, or maybe just bored
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DaGeneral In reply to Sipioc [2008-04-20 01:23:23 +0000 UTC]
Heh...I dunno. I'd say her expression is either bored or, "Looking at something else now, gonna go see that.." ness.
Rock on pal!
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Wolfox-of-life In reply to Sipioc [2008-04-21 12:02:10 +0000 UTC]
Silly girl your blessed with that bit of blood!
Nice add on
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Sipioc In reply to Wolfox-of-life [2008-04-21 20:26:45 +0000 UTC]
I suppose in a way, she is.
THanks
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Kaiju-Borru-Zetto In reply to ??? [2008-04-19 05:14:01 +0000 UTC]
First page looking good. From what I gather, Momack and Arta don't get allong well in this, lol
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