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Published: 2007-09-24 05:28:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 1125; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 7
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Branching off of the hopeful success of "Meet the Briefs", I now introduce a short Fanfic starring your favorite Red Ribbon Saiyan and mine, Bartin!
Through this comic I want to hone my skills and take on a short series that is prodominantly fighthing. I want to show movement and action sequences in a cool and dymanic way, we will see where this goes.
Synopsis:
Bartin finds that he is dead, via the Halo. Sadly he his evil misqivings have caught up with him and has landed in HELL or HFIL for those of you like me who only saw the censored english version of DBZ.
Judging from the title you can guess who Bartin just might meet here.
Wish me luck, send me advice, give me feedback!
THanks all!
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that would suck to find out that you are dead...
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Yeah, even more so to find your in hell
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Thankya, the hardest thing was finding references for it, not many people depict Hell in DBZ fashion and as a result I had to base alot off of memory.
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Yeah, well the best things come out from memory, so you know 
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Yeah, btw, they called it HFIL, i know that, what did the acronym stand for? Hall for I______ Losers
I thought it was Eternal until I realized I was an idiot for spelling it with an "I" instead of a "E"
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Errm, to be fair, I don't have a clue what it stands for, lol, I knew it were an acronym, just didn't know what, I thought it started as 'Hell For I... L...'..... could be 'Hall For Infinate Losers', I ain't too sure, lol
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Looks great!
Is it Lavahead? lol jk, I think I know who it is but I'm not 100 % sure
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Lavahead? Is that an actual villian? Well take a shot I will give you a hint in the end Bartin will meet three to four people in hell. And if you watch DBZ and GT you just might be able to guess who. Go ahead, take a shot!
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Dr.Gero? I think, and maybe Dr.Myuu, maybe
Oh and Lavahead is my OC, I was just making a joke
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Ahhh, Gero was in my mind but I figured he was killed again by Super 17 resulting in his absolutle obliteration.
I am intrigued by this Lavahead, reconosance is in order.
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Well if you want to know, He's just human. Although I didn't wanna say something but, he has an ultimate secret weapon. A human Transformation 
Okay I'm done now
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SOunds fascinating, so this is far in the future, long past GT then.
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Yup, but, I could switch his timeline and just say it was Uub, same story basicly
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An open identity is always good, Bartin originally was going to appear to fight Frieza's third form on Namek. Course back then he looked a little like Blade Slash, and his name was Bushida. That was nearly 10 years ago though. Wow I am old... and pathetic.
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haha, you're not pathetic dude
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thats what happend to bardock in my story when he died he looked at the halo^^ great job and last night i had a dream bartin was in shcool with me and i said he was the hotest thing on earth weird huh and chased him but he looked human like in final fantacy
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Well now, this is quite dangerous a creation of mine entering the dreams of others. Could i have opened Pandora's Box with this? Oh well, enjoy it while I can. Although white long hair isn't uncommon in the anime world, final fantasy or other wise.
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hes soooo hot 
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Thanks, I only hope I am up to the task of battle scenes, they weren't my specialty.
Hot huh? 
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woo hoo!! :3 oh i am sure you will do great!! and yes of course hes hot
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Pretty nice start :3 He will meet #17 here, no? :3
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Yes, and it won't stop their
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