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SkavenZverov β Daynight Wielder
Published: 2013-10-15 22:34:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 4284; Favourites: 157; Downloads: 124
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I was working on some scenes, and girls, and i kinda liked how this one started, so...here it is, and i hope you will like it!---------------------------------
photoshop, wacom
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You can sway around with those flashy sword all you want, but all i'm going to look at is your plated boobs
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Thank you very much!
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Ohhh amazing 
These are just my opinions ( omg i feel like I keep saying so many bad stuff about your art :A:! Please don't be mistaken, your art is amazing. If you want me to stop I can. I'm not even sure what I'm saying is right :A: Β ):
I feel like the helmet armor is way too big for her.
Also, the shoulder pads make her look very stiff. If you think if logically, if you will find if she tries to move her arms up, she can't because the pads block it. The armor opening should be more outward to add a more natural. Even if you say the shoulders rotate the shoulder pads can't move very much if designed like that. It's not a big real though but I have stared at a lot of armor art and have mostly seen the design ON the pads to be hinder some ( but don't they look epic xD )
These are just what I think:
Also, it so cool how you did the eyes ( I can't do that :A: , I'm trying lol) but than you don't match the eye with the swords ! Both are very cool in design as well(although the white smoking sword's effect looks odd and unnatural to me) but they should match the eye in my opinion. For me the blue eyes symbolizes something icy or cold. So maybe do ice swords as well?
But these don't have to be changed. It is what I just think would match the composition.
As for the background maybe you should add an awesome slayed beast that is enormous or many in numbers 8DDDDD!!!!
But as it is, it is still awesome *_*! *stares at it*
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Thank you very much for that feedback, i really appreciate it, very nice insights! And i am not arrogant bitch who takes criticism like personal attack, so, do not worry
You should see the helmet before this one
Yeah, about the shoulder pads, but, again, arms are a bit back, and i, maybe, should put more space there. I am still learning, and practicing armors, and a lot to learn there too
About the eyes and swords: eyes i did because that color of eyes is complementary with the rest of the picture, and for swords, they are just basic sword design of my Daynight Weapon Set that i did a while back. That is why the pic is Daynight Wielder. Because i do not have much time to polish polish polish, and i am not Polish...oh, wait, what?
Glad you liked it!
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I found some glowing eyes that do not have much of similar colors used else where but it makes sense why the color was use, if you know what I mean. Your color just seems "random" in comparison to what is going on.
I'd explain with examples but I'm suppose to be doing HW :A: and if i were to explain it would take me more time XD but gahβ¦.I love looking up stuffβ¦.
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Well, i am still learning, and in the future, i will pay attention more to the issue
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No problem. Im glad I'm not entirely saying false things :A:
I understand the concepts more than my ability to do them *sobs*
Well that good you caught it
Yes but once you get the hang of it, it can come out amazing! I think than, because her arms are leaning back, you rotated the shoulder pads incorrectly. it should not rotate down that much.
The red and blue do complement but you should have a color that flows with the others. An excellent example would be the world of war craft lich king. The surrounding background are blue in the picture which correlate with his bluish and black armor which is followed by his glowing blue eyes. Even if you have glowing eyes that extremely different from the rest, you find similar colors of the glowing eyes are also used somewhere else in the art. In fact world of warcraft art are all good references.
Well if it is just a speed paint i understand why it is not detailed ( lies, you have a lot of details in there >
No problem
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Well, it is difficult pose to draw, especially without reference and my lousy knowledge of anatomy
And i have lot od fetails on 1% of whole pic
Thanks for all the feedback, it is highly appreciated!
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Oh, i am glad you liked the fire from whole picture
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Wow. Now this is really fantastic - I disappear for a few month and when I come back you have leaped to new heights. I am thoroughly impressed. Keep going, friend!
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Thank you very much, trying my best! I still work every day ( almost ) and still trying to make at least 1 pic each day. Some of them i try to finish, and still two to do for a friend, currently on hold till weekend
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Your conviction stays an inspiration for me - I have picked up classes and am trying to do at least an hour of drawing a day even if it has been a 14 hours workday when I return home. I hope I can keep up with that routine for some time now. Your progress remains astounding!
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That means a world to me, that i am inspiring someone to do what they love
I am glad that my progress is seen, and i am in same spot, 14 -16 hors a day at work, so, i am not working as much as i should. But, i was sick also a couple of days, so it set me back a bit
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It is great to go this way and see how things are developing. I like to look at some things I have done and marvel that it was actually me. I would have never thought to get anywhere near where I am now and that makes me hope and work for more.
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Well, now you know you can, so...? What are you waiting?
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I am not - I am taking my leaps and right now I am determined to go as far as I can.
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Of course, at least, while we are sane
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Which not necessarily means there is much time left ...
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