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Published: 2012-09-19 04:39:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 563; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 6
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Description I'M ALIVE HERE HAVE SOME FANART WITH A SIDE OF BACON AND AWESOME.

Finally. This took me a while. Started out as a lined-paper sketch I made during one of my classes, then I decided to digitally color it.

I think I'm getting the hang of this digital art thing didn't come out EXACTLY how I wanted it to in some areas, but I still like it.

Homestuck and I have a love-hate relationship. But I had to draw this. Because ribbons. Also because black flames, which weren't as fun as I thought they would be. Also, Dark Rose's theme was stuck in my head.

Homestuck belongs to (C) :iconhussieplz:

Art belongs to me (C) Sketchris

EDIT That gap mentioned in ~AaronNeathery 's critique was REALLY starting to bug me, so I updated it. Enjoy! END EDIT
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AaronNeathery [2012-09-19 19:09:54 +0000 UTC]

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Okay.. wow.. You have a very good sense of composition! If I had any suggestion at all, it would be to try to emphasize the flow of the composition by more carefully aligning all of the elements at play into the "wedge" made up by the black flames.. The light area at the bottom also interrupts the drawing's flow by creating too much competition with the focus of the image. I'd recommend thinking of drawings like this as a unified whole from the very beginning.. because what you have here is a very good attempt at establishing a composition after the fact by adding elements to a preexisting pose. Nice sense of the form beneath the fabric, btw..

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TheWizardOfTime [2012-09-20 03:46:43 +0000 UTC]

OOooohhhhhhh that looks amazing!!!

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sketchris In reply to TheWizardOfTime [2012-09-27 02:30:23 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!!

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xxEmoGingerWolfxx [2012-09-20 02:02:41 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome ^^

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Areetala [2012-09-19 23:40:24 +0000 UTC]

Nice! I love the ribbon and the background.

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sketchris In reply to Areetala [2012-09-28 02:24:11 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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TehRedBlur [2012-09-19 17:32:48 +0000 UTC]

I refuse to write a critique. I'm too nice.

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sketchris In reply to TehRedBlur [2012-09-28 02:24:16 +0000 UTC]

Okay.

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Z-E-L [2012-09-19 04:46:26 +0000 UTC]

WEGIHOPWEGH

HOLY CRAP, I CAN'T STOP LOOKING AT THIS.

Every time I take another peek at it, I find something new to marvel over! Lovely work man, this is so awesome, I just can't even!

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sketchris In reply to Z-E-L [2012-09-29 07:24:33 +0000 UTC]

THANK YOU FRIEND!!!

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Z-E-L In reply to sketchris [2012-10-03 03:58:13 +0000 UTC]

YES, YOUR WELCOME.

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ShimmerOfLightning [2012-09-19 04:41:08 +0000 UTC]

Haha I know about Homestuck from a friend of mine... XD

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sketchris In reply to ShimmerOfLightning [2012-09-29 08:39:42 +0000 UTC]

yeah XD it's pretty popular.

I myself have a love-hate relationship with it.

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