shadownz [2002-02-19 04:53:18 +0000 UTC]

a wonderful poem. I just can't say anymore, because it just won't do justice...

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jsenn [2001-12-29 14:52:58 +0000 UTC]

Oh, Ruth, this is wonderful, and gentle...it's perfect in your words, breathe life, gentle movement, whisper, soothing. More importantly it became your voice echoing in empty spaces. I think perhaps, had I been able to express it as you have, this is what I'd have said the first time I ever read a poem of yours. "Your voice echoes in empty spaces." That, Ruth, is outstanding. Joy

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meglocrush [2001-12-03 13:53:01 +0000 UTC]

i need a muse.

:meglocrush: https://meglocrush.deviantart.com
(im not as eem as you think i am)

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doomit [2001-12-03 13:46:45 +0000 UTC]

Really simple and yet, as most chinese haiku's go, profoundly visual.

-doomit

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pixelcatalyst [2001-12-03 00:15:29 +0000 UTC]

Touching.
please include 2Dpixelcatalyst too


http://pixelcatalyst.i85.net
pixelcatalyst.i85.net

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locussolus [2001-12-02 22:38:09 +0000 UTC]

it creeps right in. beautiful thoughts, a splash of feeling that says so much more than its 4 lines... muses are good.

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faithwalker [2001-12-02 19:39:06 +0000 UTC]

Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful.

I love the way that wind or the blown breath is congruent throught the whole piece. I feel the vibrations....

Faithwalker

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keen [2001-12-02 15:30:00 +0000 UTC]

tight versing attracts me like purplelight/uv to a honeybee. and this is a bright flower indeed.

step into the slipstream:
https://www.deviantart.com/deviation.php? id=99040
-flow-

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dreamz13 [2001-12-02 11:09:59 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful words. I haven't found my muse yet though. Why 2d? Any special meaning?

Dream on...

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kodama [2001-12-02 04:01:21 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful, and soothing in a spiritual sense.

--Jai guru deva--
-- Kodama --

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oddlyaromatic [2001-12-02 02:30:01 +0000 UTC]

I like it

ness!

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sumalangitnawa [2001-12-01 23:18:05 +0000 UTC]

i appreciate the beauty that you bring.

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article [2001-12-01 21:54:03 +0000 UTC]

like poison..

you breathe death into me,
your harsh, inconsiderate actions give me torment
your voice becomes my medicine -
a searing pain echoing in my relief.

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lotus [2001-12-01 21:38:06 +0000 UTC]

A wonderful poem, I really like it.. Simple, short, and sweet.. Indeed a great writing.

Lotus__ _ _
D.
The Lost Boy

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twilight-ashes [2001-12-01 20:04:22 +0000 UTC]

yup, i agree with manadrake... very soothing and serene...

just lovely...

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manadrake [2001-12-01 19:53:42 +0000 UTC]

How very soothing, and serene. It is a magical thing to be in touch with one's muse...and creative ability like you so obviously are.

-----------
~MD~
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When all think alike, few are thinking much at all. - Walter Lippman

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woozster [2001-12-01 17:03:24 +0000 UTC]

Simplified words which breathes soul into a minute piece; amazing this Muse must be

.:they call me woozie:.

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umbilikal [2001-12-01 16:39:16 +0000 UTC]

Very nice and simple....I believe this sounds like a part of a whole....or maybe that is just the feeling I get.

umbilikal https://umbilikal.deviantart.com
deviantMAG staff - news editor
~where does the fist go when the hand opens~

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rajivmathur [2001-12-01 15:11:54 +0000 UTC]

four line magic by the four letter wonder.

rajiv--

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