jsenn [2001-12-29 16:10:21 +0000 UTC]

Oh, yes, now I remember the lost comments and you are missing 15 of them on this poem. Darn I hate that! Joy

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jsenn [2001-12-29 15:02:17 +0000 UTC]

My gracious, Ruth. I wish to be a graphics artist right now so you could write about my work, lol. This is wonderful. You need to write pixelcatalyst a note and let him know this is here so he can respond. Joy
(h-hour said breathing is a theme of yours, so is water (rain) and you should read his newest poem, "raindrops". When I read it yesterday, I thought of you, Ruth, you will love it)

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h-hour [2001-12-20 16:55:03 +0000 UTC]

"Breathing."

This seems to be a theme throughout a lot of your work ruth. This slow, smooth, life-giving pulse seems to have really made an impact on you as an artist. There's so much in that word, I compare it to an eye for visual art in that there is so much depth and variety in how it's used. I too really like the rhyming you have here. The piece is rhythmic, but not in any particular rhythm. Beautiful.

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deviot [2001-12-08 09:50:17 +0000 UTC]

very tight rhyme goin' on here!!

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