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Published: 2000-11-22 05:00:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 486; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 68
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fill the spaceforever echoing the shades
of gray, and black, and blue
with your sparks that are
brighter than any earthlight.
i live to see
how shadows
make your silver streaks
glow.
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Comments: 6
Nice.
I'd say get rid of the two periods, though. You really don't need them.
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fill the space and feel the space around you. shadows have arms and our souls glow - mirrors - suns.
uhmm...
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Why cant I describe what Im feeling right now? Im stunned, speachless, grrr I love it!
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small is simple is generally wonderful. it's really hard to make a great sounding poem in such a short amount of space.
--[ jark ]--
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I like that. I like it very much. It has a magic about it. Saying a thing which means another, and doing that with beauty is a wonderful ability.
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