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Tortwag [2016-01-09 15:57:27 +0000 UTC]

...What FelixWind said. Really. What FelixWind said. he's spot on. And everything I said in my reviews stand strong here, too.

I mean what the heck, I wasn't expecting a cute scene with Crusade! Him bitting his tongue and at all! And we even got character development for the villains already!

Anyway, let's calm down and try to be professional - btw I'm totally starting to dislike Penny as well, though to her credit, I do think she does her job well.
Ahem.

So, this was awesome. Everything's still there: awesome music, awesome dialogue, awesome development, awesome settings and situations. It was truly enjoyable to my eyes and ears, and I'm glad I wasn't disappointed.
However, if I was to give any suggestions for improvement, I'd say it by starting to ask this: are you a writer?
I'm saying this because I am one, and I'm starting to see things that I was said to have trouble with in the past - and still have trouble with today. What I'm talking about is the fact that, upon watching this episode, it felt like some of the characters - most notably Crusade and... uh... Mine's brother, sorry for forgetting his name - were "in character" during most of the dialogue, and suddenly they switched to saying things that felt like you, Sky, were talking, and not them, the characters.

I'm not sure if the way I'm saying this makes sense, and to be fair, considering how you've worked on the different types of dialogues for ALL of them, I didn't see what I'm talking about that much. I just want to be sure that you're aware of it - if you were, ignore the paragraph above. Aside that thing - I insist on the fact that it is not a real issue, as, again, ALL of your characters are different in appearance and dialogue - this was pretty much flawless.



PS: I just realized that Ace's powers might be a cameo directed to AceofSpades' character. ...Huh. "Personality, abilities, all that stuff."

...Huh. I'd love to get a character ready for this. Let's see what I can do.

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FelixWind [2016-01-07 21:12:23 +0000 UTC]

You know how to keep an audience well engaged and on the grips of their seats for an entire Flash video, and honestly man not too many people I watch can pull that off consistently throughout an entire episode like you did with this one. Can't wait to see more, keep up the good work man. XD

Also; you still taking cameos/any roles you need filled? I may be able to contribute if so.

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ChillaV5 [2015-12-28 00:07:21 +0000 UTC]

aww maaan i hate cliff hangers >^<






























still worth the wait :] awesome animation

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CyberStar1332 [2015-12-27 21:15:49 +0000 UTC]

Noticed this afterwards, too: Molotov said Hydro can't do something yet. Do what? There's possibly multiple levels of dark energy. That's my prediction

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AceofspadesTH [2015-12-27 19:07:31 +0000 UTC]

MAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAN this is getting too good I can't wait for the next episode soon to happen. Good job man I definitely love the cinematics in this episode man. Looking forward to the next part of this episode!

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Metakaabii [2015-12-27 03:38:59 +0000 UTC]

Looks like stuff happened here. And stuff is happening right now. And stuff will happen later.

Pinkstreak seems like a bitch. Bitches be whack, yo.
Periwinkle Mask seems almost generic doomsday villain-esque. Doesn't seem to carry too, too much depth.
Crusade's teef is sharp.
Ice Climber Dee is adorable.
Evil Storo probably does groundbreaking scientific research in his spare time.
Penny Arcade gon hab a bad time maybe
Sunny D was eating some rays in that flashback (unleash the power of the sun ooooooooooo)
Lady-looks-like-a-dude is a workaholic.
Cardguy is using Card Substitute no Jutsu probably

I swear to god if you kill Sergeant Teale this series is ruined (and I'll bitch at you on mIRC for like five minutes and stop caring)

I actually kinda looked at this one on-and-off as I was listening to some varieties of jams. Speaking of jams, good job on using one of my suggested tunes in there.

I almost want to get back to work on things... but fallout 4 tho :c And WoW raiding tho. :c

Maybe talk more on mIRC or something, bobi.

Instant edit: I swear to god I saw a fucking freeze-frame bonus as the camera was panning to lady-looks-like-a-dude and her bike while she was on the phone. I swear you snuck something in there but im too lazy to watch the unskippable pet fetish Pinkstreak has.

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SonicGoku2 [2015-12-27 00:30:23 +0000 UTC]

This was just AMAZING! Your animations teach me a lot! I loved the action and storytelling, they just go perfectly together! Kinda weird since each part is 20 minutes tho xD
Can't wait for ze next one, nice work m8 C:

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CelesticSapphire [2015-12-26 21:53:06 +0000 UTC]

This was amazing! Smooth and great quality animation! The fight scenes were well put and really set in the mood for what was going to come and great job with the character personalities in this one! 

I can see why she's called Mine... insane girl. She's like a yandere in her own way except 100x worse (mostly in possession and fighting). I find those guys who live in the manor pretty intriguing. 

I love how you base them around different times, were an event from last episode, what happened before that is shown in the future episode. I like that touch, really makes you want to think.

Any ways, amazing animation and I can't wait for the next part! Keep doing great!

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CyberStar1332 [2015-12-26 20:03:50 +0000 UTC]

Thoughts Going through the episode:

1. Well. Something tells me we'll be seeing a LOT more of the prisoner/toys. Especially the ones who actually have details. After all; According to Sky logic: The more details/wilder hair, the more important they'll be! *shot*
(Goes out of order since I put these in after)
7. So, Crusade's teeth are actually like that? Haha, I thought it was basically a design choice.
8. So that's what happened to Bridgette. Interesting...
9. Dangit, if you don't put Crusade vs Sundine somewhere in this series, i'll be sad xD
2. Huh. We're getting to see more of the 'Dark Bridges' terrorist group. From the ones we've seen:
Atom: Poor guy. Seems like he's the only normal one out of them all.
Mine: Bloody psycho, although it seems like most of the 'Dark Bridges' are messed up in their own way. Also seems in love with Perceival (ship it *shot*)
Nuke: I love this guy already. He seems exactly like the type of person to go on laughing gas. Also, seems to pair up with Rocket a lot.
Rocket: Not much I can gather from him, although it seems like he's mentally unstable.
Cherry: Almost nothing can be said. She's the healer, apparently. I'm guessing her personality will either be A; Mad scientist, or B; sane, no nonsense. Just went back through the intro, and she does NOT look like a girl. Of course, I've made this mistake twice now, so who knows? ^^'
Leader: Ooh, a mystery, eh? Wonder who it could be. We can rule out quite a few people, such as Venter, the mysterious leader of Mysticia (if I read that right in part 2), the masked kid (who I suspect is Riske's brother), Penny, Perceival, Freesia, any of the orphans, and possibly 13th,
Hydro: Seems like either a fun lover and the puntastic kind of guy. Reminds me of Chuggaaconroy in a way, and doesn't take fighting seriously, if what Molotov said is anything to go by.
Molotov: Honestly, I thought she was a dude too ;-;. Anyways, she seems like she's protective of Hydro. Are they siblings too, like Mine and Atom? who knows...
3. Ooh, Mine's got it in for Penny.
4. Curse you, for cliffhanging the confrontation D:<
5. Question: Why are all the blade knights not coloured in a greyscale? It seems off, for grunts not to be a shade of grey.
6. Holy snap, it's (name deleted, so they can discover for themselves)! I honestly did NOT expect to see him here. I wonder how big of a role he's gonna play... Speaking of cameos, though, Did you ever receive the sheet I sent for my own cameo? If you didn't, I'll resend.

..That's a LOT of impressions. Anyways, keep up the good work and I hope to see more of this awesome series!

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CyberStar1332 [2015-12-26 19:20:16 +0000 UTC]

*sees Sky's newest upload. Immediately closes everything else to focus.*

No joke, I'm enjoying this series immensely.

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pinkatlemonade [2015-12-26 16:48:02 +0000 UTC]

10/10

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Palooka120 [2015-12-26 16:06:18 +0000 UTC]

So... My hype exploded as I woke up this morning...


Why do people brush there teeth and THEN eat?


Sorry, this is now my favorite Christmas though. SO good

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Goldduststarwarrior5 [2015-12-26 15:33:07 +0000 UTC]

Awesome!

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BioMetalNeo [2015-12-26 13:20:03 +0000 UTC]

Why am I thinking of the 7 deadly sin from FMAB when I see this lot?

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KratosGoji91 [2015-12-26 10:41:03 +0000 UTC]

That animation looks good!

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