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Skyward-Dreamer — T E Treason part 1

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TADA! – my first ever attempt at drama.

(Please note that this is just the first part of the prologue so there is no conclusion yet.)

This project is a tribute to the intriguing universe of Mass Effect, that I feel head over heels in love with about six months ago. But first and foremost it’s a tribute to my new darling alien race, the turians.

Also please note that this story is set in alternateverse format; while it begins at the start of Mass Effect, events play out a bit differently. I’ve tried keeping characters true to themeselves, personality-wise, and have added a few of my own along the way.

Anyway, I hope this will be enjoyable to some small degree at last. Thank you for reading.

Mass Effect and its characters belong to BioWare.
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Comments: 74

Skyward-Dreamer In reply to ??? [2011-04-13 13:10:30 +0000 UTC]

No, that won't work at all.

Hrm, and I got myself a new Xbox, one of those neat little black things, a few days ago, so I've been gaming WAY too much ever since. Still, I'm nearly ready to colour page 10.

And the tour was such a treat! I'm so looking forward to your next comic, page or art piece.

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ErsbethShadowsong In reply to Skyward-Dreamer [2011-04-17 10:17:03 +0000 UTC]

Hey, it's your life and you're the one who has to decide on how to spend your free time! I understand you very well: sometimes you just don't find the spirit to pick up pencils or markers to draw, you just want to save the galaxy ^^ I have a PS2 and sometimes I load Katamari or Prince of Persia to disconnect a little!

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Skyward-Dreamer In reply to ErsbethShadowsong [2011-04-18 19:50:44 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, good point.

Gaming is great for all kinds of purposes from simply killing time, having a break or just plainly experiencing something mindblowing.

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ErsbethShadowsong In reply to Skyward-Dreamer [2011-04-18 19:56:04 +0000 UTC]

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Sithking-Zero In reply to ??? [2011-03-31 14:25:22 +0000 UTC]

You like ME too? Wait, no...

You like mass effect as well? (no confusion with ME2...)

Is there any chance you would draw Sangheli and Turians in the same comic? They're two of my favorite "Bad Guy," races, so to speak...

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Skyward-Dreamer In reply to Sithking-Zero [2011-03-31 21:49:38 +0000 UTC]

Yes, I'm a rather new fan of the Mass Effect universe, I discovered it about six months ago. And I do like both games but prefer the first game over the second.

Well, that would be rather difficult I'm afraid. Even though I had one silly idea on how to do a crossover mini-comic like that. But for now, I really want to work on the next part of this new project of mine.

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Lune-du-Marssi In reply to ??? [2011-03-30 19:39:22 +0000 UTC]

Awww how pretty!

Don't you go again saying that you don't have a style, 'cause this is beyond awesome! And plot wise I can not wait to see what path you decide to take with your characters I'm looking forward to it!

(On a side note... Merril is cute!)

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Skyward-Dreamer In reply to Lune-du-Marssi [2011-03-30 22:54:59 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

Wow ... and you know how much I was worrying about this? That perhaps you would hardly be able to tell that these are turians at all? The first two pages were really quite shaky. I think I'm getting to know them a little better by now though.

At one point I was planning a paragon vs renegade chapter, but it turned out to be so complicated (and so much work) I had to abandon the idea and choose one of the outcomes ... I hope you'll think it's the right one.

Thanks. I was worrying, because of his rather odd looks, that everyone would think he's ugly.

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Lune-du-Marssi In reply to Skyward-Dreamer [2011-04-05 15:35:55 +0000 UTC]

Aw you had no reason to think that, Garrus looks exactly like him. You can immediately recognize him. And you managed to give them facial expressions and god knows how hard it can be! I'd say you completely won with this artwork, show us noobs how it's done!

It sounds like a nice idea for a chapter! xD But you're right, too much work! I know I'll like it!

You're very welcome! :thumb144220169:

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Skyward-Dreamer In reply to Lune-du-Marssi [2011-04-14 21:26:36 +0000 UTC]

Oh, blush! I'm so glad you think that and I hope you'll find the story worthwhile as well. It's really hard with the expressions though, mostly it seems their eyes and mouths show their emotions, so that's what I've been focusing on so far.

Yes, it would really take forever. I still keep the notes though as I haven't settled 100% on which outcome I will choose eventually.

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Lune-du-Marssi In reply to Skyward-Dreamer [2011-04-16 21:46:06 +0000 UTC]

I so think I will.
i'd say your focus is well placed, the emotions are really noticeable.

Oh, you keep building up suspense!

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Skyward-Dreamer In reply to Lune-du-Marssi [2011-04-18 19:57:58 +0000 UTC]

Excellent.

Thank you. It's fun experimenting with this, I'm still learning the turian way of things .. it'll be a long process before I've figured it all out.

Oops.

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Lune-du-Marssi In reply to ??? [2011-03-30 19:35:04 +0000 UTC]

Oh oh!!! Handsome Turians!!!

*Reads* Sorry, havn't read it just yet, I'll coment again once I have!

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Skyward-Dreamer In reply to Lune-du-Marssi [2011-03-30 22:53:09 +0000 UTC]

Squeee. Thank you!

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Mattex01 In reply to ??? [2011-03-30 19:26:16 +0000 UTC]

Wow, so this is what you're up too! Love it!

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Skyward-Dreamer In reply to Mattex01 [2011-03-30 22:51:13 +0000 UTC]

Yep, this is it indeed.

And this is like the first tiny little tip of the ice berg, lol! Thank you so much.

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Mattex01 In reply to Skyward-Dreamer [2011-03-31 02:50:55 +0000 UTC]

Any time

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Lorcan0c In reply to ??? [2011-03-30 15:03:22 +0000 UTC]



I never thought this would look so good! That's incredihle!

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Skyward-Dreamer In reply to Lorcan0c [2011-03-30 17:40:51 +0000 UTC]

Really? Do you think so? Thanks, that means a lot!

As you know, I've been agonizing a lot over this project .. I'm so relieved that the first reveiws have been so kind. Now I feel really inspired to continue this project.

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Lorcan0c In reply to Skyward-Dreamer [2011-03-30 19:05:10 +0000 UTC]

I most certainly do think so!

I'm happy to be an inspiration

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Skyward-Dreamer In reply to Lorcan0c [2011-03-30 22:48:30 +0000 UTC]

Phew.

And you're a very good one at that, thank you so much.

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Meken In reply to ??? [2011-03-30 14:08:34 +0000 UTC]


OH GOD YES

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Skyward-Dreamer In reply to Meken [2011-03-30 14:16:23 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow, you've read it already? Lol, I forget that reading it takes mere minutes while working on them takes forever!

Thank you so much.

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