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Published: 2016-10-16 12:52:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 539; Favourites: 32; Downloads: 0
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Description
"Singing radiohead at the top of our lungs, with the boom box blaring as we're falling in love"
- "Here's To Never Growing Up", Avril Lavinge.
Look an actual lined piece, that isn't of myself! It took me so long, since my boyfriend told me to try line art without using an S-5 pen.. so I used 12. It was HARD! Mabel is just precious though...
Time Taken: 6H
Programs Used: Paint Tool Sai
Device Used: Wacom Intuos Pen And Touch Small
Art (c)Β Yumanai Β
Mabel Pines (c) Disney
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Comments: 11
Awesome work! I love the little speckles you've added in the skirt and hair, and the lighting is really cute ^^ The eyes are beautifully made, too! The background is simple yet seems to fit the drawing pretty well, and making the braces just the dots is a great touch.
I'd suggest maaaaybe making her head a little bit less narrow, and trying to put more detail into the ruffles instead of representing them as just lines. Also, while you've gotten the shading pretty well, make sure that the darkest patches are in the right place.
One last thing; something about the face doesn't strike me as being quite right. Possibly it's the eyebrows, or maybe it's just that the mouth is a little off.
Overall, though, great job!
(sorry if this isn't really helpful; this is my first critique..)
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Ooh, could you do this to some of my works?? I'd love to try and improve, and you'd be a great start ^^
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Thank you so very much for taking the time to critique my work ;u; I will be sure to look at all the things you have mentioned and take them into consideration! <3 <3
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COOOL I love mabel <3 I agree with the critiqueΒ Β
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This drawing is pretty cure,and you represented Mabel just right but..this drawing has some issues,let me point the out.
First:the hands or lack there of..I know hands are a bit hard to draw.I have the same mistake too,but at least try.
And the body in my opinion it's too long.And the legs to me they seen too long?
But as for the coloring,the colors seem to match perfectly,i like that you used warm and calm colors,and i like the little particles you added.
As for the face,you did it right.But as for the braces to me they seem a bit simple,but other that good job.
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Thank you very much for taking the time to critique!! I'll be sure to work on improving the areas you mentioned ;u; <3 <3
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Thank you so much!
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Thank you so much ;u;Β
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