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Published: 2011-06-10 05:57:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 14380; Favourites: 117; Downloads: 0
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Here it is chapter 4 “Return to the Club”Don’t worry the part you writing will be used in this chapter.
I just wanted to get some parts done here before the scene at the club.
I did had a few difficulties to how to open this chapter but this idea came into my head when I was reading the Disney comics plus another part of my concept will be use in this chapter.
Daisy trise to be ladylike and just say hi. And good old Donald is ready to beat up Mortimer.
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Could you please send me a link of chapter 1. I can't find it
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Oh, ok. Well could you let me know when it is, this is a great story.
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Wow! Beautiful artwork! It looks VERY real! And...hehe...given the fact that Donald already beat up Mortimer TWICE (once when he badmouthed Mickey, and another when he wanted Daisy's phone number), Mortimer should just turn the corner right now.
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Honestly, part of him might want a beating at this point. It'd be "deserved" from his point of view and not as hurtful as being left to die.
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Awww...true. I guess this Mortimer is really changing. And Donald's not the type to cruelly beat someone up who's alre learned their lesson.
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I cant tell whether this is going to turn out good or bad.
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I can imagine Donald's voice in this, I still can't understand him though.
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Great Drawing and storyline!!! Your Imagination is amazing!!!
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Oh my, when I saw Donald I was thinking "Oh Noooo" Mortimer in bigger trouble than he was with Mickey. Donald can hold a grudge....Cant wait to know how this one turns out.
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I love how you can capture the expression perfectly!
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Donald keeping a good temper!? I think my brain just died 
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Worry? This is a perfect beginning! I can't wait to see how the plot will unfold. Very good start so far.
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Thanks. I was going to use Horace a clarabel but I'm saving that for later.
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Whoa... Donald keeping a cool head? 
I wonder how this is going to turn out, though...
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83 Who needs "Mickey Mouse's clubhouse" I'd rather read these comics!
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Yeah that show is bad but I did use the character design from that for Daisy.
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Well then again I wouldn't watch "Mickey Mouse's clubhouse" with a 10ft pole, "House of Mouse" is WAY better.
Also Ive noticed little or no spelling errors either lately in your comics, I think you're really making a great effort in conquering your ailments! Congratulations!
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The old cartoons and HoM is better then that clubhouse.
sent me a correction in the notes it was just one word that needed changing
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