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Sleeper77 — Kidnapping Storm, Part 1.4, Alt. View
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Published: 2014-09-01 03:51:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 1900; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 95
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The officer turned around, remembering that he had set down his bio-pulse taser. His right arm shifted to balance Ororo, while his fingers caressed the fabric of her briefs when he stooped over to retrieve it. He attached the taser with its belt clip to an empty spot on the back of his belt. He returned to the van, where he prepared to lower Ororo onto the thick mat which padded the van's interior floor. He cradled her, momentarily unwilling to relinquish a possession which left him hard with rapture. Ororo squinted through her heavy eyelids. His fondling fingers had awakened her. It should have taken a simple thought to stun her adversary with an electrical shock. Her powers did not respond. However she did not panic. She instead quickly observed the taser on his belt. It was within her reach.* * *
For the first part, see . For the previous scene, see . For the original view, see .
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Comments: 5
Really Pleased to see this image ( and all the other images in this series) again
Will there ever be any more ?
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Appreciate the Alt. Views
They allow us to clearly see just how close our heroine's hand is to that " Bio -Pulse Taser ( love that name ) and just how easy it would be for her to get a hold of it and turn things around. That really adds to the " what happens next tension created by the picture and the story .
Well done.
Like wise we get an even clearer view of just how delicate and flimsy her undergarments are ( Appreciate that view as well)
And we a get a clearer view of those invasive "fondling fingers" that roused the heroine ( and are now no doubt , really annoying proud dignified X Woman)
Also want to mention the level of detail you worked into the story and the speculation that it spurs
Eg - That thick mat that pads the van's interior floor and the fact that the assailant is lowering Storm onto it and not just dumping her . This implies that her captors do not want her to be injured in transit and need for her to arrive when ever she is being taken in good shape and healthy ( and then there was that" hands off " given to the assailant)
All this quietly and efficiently tells the reader that there is a wider scheme at work here. This is some good story telling
Thank you for it .
I am very keen to learn what happens next.
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Glad you liked it! Just posted that next part.
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