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Published: 2016-06-09 11:20:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 5312; Favourites: 55; Downloads: 246
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After receiving some really good feedback from a couple of very talented artists, I did a rework of this image. Modifying some of the textures, changing the lighting, and adding in some scenery. Let me know what you thin, and let me know which one you like better!Original dialog:
"No, I'm sure they're checking you out!"
"Over there?"
"Don't turn your head. You're being too obvious!"
"Ok... just a peek then."
"Yeah, they're definitely checking you out."
"... they *are* checking me out. They don't look to bad themselves. What do you think?"
"Mmmm I have no complaints!"
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Comments: 39
I have to say that this is indeed an improvement on the original. Th whole things blends together so much better with nothing seemingly out of place.
The new wall and it's textures look much better than the old brick wall and compliment the new ground. The addition of the maple leaves and branches instead of the green vines helps to frame the girls within the scene. Overall i'd have to say that this is a 100% improvement over the original.
Seeing the girls in relation to the bicycle really lends a scale to them, it would be interesting to see some stats for each of the girls.
Great work my friend e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
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Thank you very much for the kind words, and taking the time again to review the piece. I'm glad it came together better this time, I'm much more pleased with how it turned out!
I'll take your suggestion into consideration and see if I can't get a piece together to publish the girls stats
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You're more than welcome!
I should really continue with some more of my girls bio's.
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It's a windy day! And a short skirt!!
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It is an improvement on an already great scene.
Nicely done!
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Thank you very much!
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Haha.. yeah, it's a little bit of that too
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about how tall is Ivy?
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very mice, the shades pf the new wall and the ;eaves on the ground add a new dimension, makes the scene very natural, love your work!
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Thank you! I'm glad you like the new version! I appreciate the compliments!
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Very nice, love the new wall, it works wonderfully. And magnificent idea with the leaves and framing them, and sweet touch with the sidewalk leaves scattered down there. Love this.
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Thank you very much. I was very pleased with how the rework turned out. A little annoyed I didn't do it right the first time
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True, even I have days like that sometimes. Times when you throw things away, what you put out isn't what you envisioned, and when things don't come out how you wanted despite your best efforts. It's all cool, and part of being an artist lol. What one of my art teachers taught me was to be humble, take comments into consideration, and improve based on that shared experience between viewer and creator. You have done that beautifully here, and improved a piece with several strong elements into a wonderfully strong and focused piece overall.
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Thank you very much! It's good to be reminded from time to time that it's an iterative process and growth is part of it.
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Too slow!!
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Oh no! What do I do?
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Stand very still? Maybe they only see movement... like dinosaurs.
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(Stands still)
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Looks wonderful and the glimpse of knickers is always so sexy.Β Super work hon!
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Thank you so much! I thought the knickers would be a nice touch
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Thank you! I was really pleased with how Ivy turned out too!
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This one's incredible!! Everything blends together so smoothly.
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Thank you so much! I'm glad to hear you think that!
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No problem.
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Why in defeat? I think this image was "harder" in the artistic/vision space than in the execution of the rendering and physics. If there's something specific (or even in general) that I did that you'd want to know about, send me a note, and I'll do my best to answer!
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Oh it's definitely the artistic vision that I'm jealous of... Lol.
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I've seen your work, the reason I offered the technical advice is because you have the artistic vision. It's already there, you just need to run with it more
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Thanks.. 
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Wow, even better!
She still busted me though...Β (._. )
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Thank you!!!
She did. They're pretty smart
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