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Published: 2009-05-08 01:37:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 2365; Favourites: 35; Downloads: 43
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Sorry about the wait, but ch. 21 is finally up! In it, Kim goes on a mercenary mission with Team Probable, and finds that hanging out with villains too much can muddy your own vision of right and wrong! Read up and review up!Review at ffnet:
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And check out the semi-illustrated version:
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After the mission, Kim gets PAID my Mr. Matter. Even though he's a bad guy, and even though Kim doesn't take payment, she finds herself tempted by the money troubles experienced by Monique....
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Comments: 15
Slyrr In reply to ItsAllPossible [2016-04-26 03:16:39 +0000 UTC]
Thanks Β Still writing Graduation... Β (dang real life intrusions!)
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Skoshi8 [2009-05-09 23:08:55 +0000 UTC]
To tear or not to tear,,,,
Matter hasn't done anything really bad yet, but somewhere along the line Kim's actions might be construed as aiding and abetting. Cashing the check could come back to haunt her.
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Slyrr In reply to Skoshi8 [2009-05-10 00:09:04 +0000 UTC]
And interesting thought... will I make use of it? Only TIME will tell! Mwuh-ha-ha-ha haaaa!
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Slyrr In reply to uuutu56 [2009-05-08 23:09:48 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I know in a TV ep, Kim would probably rip up the check right away, but in my story, I've given her more time to think about it...
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Nethar [2009-05-08 12:13:33 +0000 UTC]
Part of me is wondering where did Matter and Senior get all there Money?
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Slyrr In reply to Nethar [2009-05-08 23:10:42 +0000 UTC]
Good question - I wrote it off by saying he 'made a fortune as a business tycoon' and retired early. I didn't want to bore readers by explaining what business he was in...
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Slyrr In reply to thorman [2009-05-08 23:11:22 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! Hope you will continue to enjoy it...
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Slyrr In reply to thorman [2009-05-08 23:11:37 +0000 UTC]
Seems weird yes, but I made it happen!
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Talk3talk4 [2009-05-08 01:38:56 +0000 UTC]
β¦Goodjob β¦
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Slyrr In reply to Talk3talk4 [2009-05-08 01:39:55 +0000 UTC]
Wow, that was fast Thanks!
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