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Smaragdia — Summoning
Published: 2009-09-21 17:31:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 940; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 23
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Firstly a big thanks to because i used a photo for reference for the woman's pose.Emm... real resolution 4500px 300dpi.. 50 layers! (are they few???) for some details i even used 1px brush XD ah my eyes burn ahahahah
Im happy i did it!!!!!!! yeyyyyyy
Entered Moonlight contest [link]
The Remake pic
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thank you so much!! 
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Excellent work! I have a few suggestions... (I apologize in advanced for sounding harsh
First, although when downloaded you don't notice this, the girl's face looks too smooth. Now, this may or may not have been your intention, but her nose looks very small and her cheeks have very little definition. I would suggest a little variation in tone, if not shadows, to define her face a bit more.
Next, the rocks broken around the demon look very smooth, as though carved open. Usually when rocks break, they are quite jagged. Try adding some jagged lines, especially near the rocks right in front of the demon.
Some texture might make them more natural-looking too.
Lastly, the girl's hair looks great, but looks as though there is an invisible shield preventing it from touching her back. I'm assuming this was where her back Used to be. I would suggest adding at least a few stray hairs below this line so its not as noticable.
Once again I really do apologize if I sounded harsh - I tend to do that when critiquing.
Dan
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no its ok! i dont know if i can make those things because i rush to do a second entry for this competition. But i will try to fix those things ^^
And please keep on tell me whats wrong i may not fix those ones but i will know what to take care to what i'll draw next ^^
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Can't wait to see the second!
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come critique mine too please!! 
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oh well i could use some help with [link] and [link] I keep changing stuf but still something is not very good on them
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hmm i like it dark! i thought i put too many lights XD
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Den ti palevis! Prepi na matho ki ego na xrisimopio polixromes photoskiasis...
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sosto auto, alla panta anisixo pos den tha mou vgi kalo ke auto me apotrepi apo to na piramatisto T^T
tha prospathiso pantos.
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exeis layers. xwse osa na nai. min fobasai!! an as poume exeis mple min fobasai to kitrino i kai to prasino.. mwb...
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