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SMH-REDELK — You can let go now-WIP

Published: 2005-09-30 21:32:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 511; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 10
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Description Now I thought I'd better post something nice along with the crap I just submitted here. It's not finished but it's getting there slowly. I'm not sure what to do with Luke's arm, I mean he's holding an ax and also supposed to be holding Lana as well. **BIG SIGH**


All I have to say is that I really like the way Lana's hair turned out. I may change Luke's eye and I definitely need to work some more on his hair.
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Comments: 24

Tatooine92 [2006-08-29 22:10:13 +0000 UTC]

I just ended up here (for some odd, twisted reason . . . hmmm . . .) again, and I think you just need to draw Luke an arm. I think you ought to draw no axe at all and go with that Luke gets all flustered idea. Yeah . . . hey, that sounds like a fanfic I wrote!

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Tatooine92 In reply to Tatooine92 [2006-08-30 20:44:59 +0000 UTC]

Nope, I haven't got a single fanfic posted. I write mainly for my fun and occasionally for my sister, so they're not good enough for anybody else to read. Besides, they're kinda mushy (can you tell I'm trying to reason myself out of posting them?) since they star myself. Lol. Oh well, perhaps someday I'll post 'em just for grins. Now, if I could illustrate them too, that would just make my day brighter.

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SMH-REDELK In reply to Tatooine92 [2006-08-30 05:17:33 +0000 UTC]

Funny you should say fanfic, because this is an illustration for my own Star Wars UA story, Corellian Pledge. The script for the scene above is sitting with a quick sketch I first did of this picture, also with the same title. If you're interested go here and tell me what you think of it. You can let go now. . I personally like the sketch better than this more refined piece.

Do you have any of your writtings posted?

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SMH-REDELK [2006-08-24 17:15:35 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. I'm glad you like it.

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Tatooine92 [2006-08-24 16:23:34 +0000 UTC]

Wow, thanks for sending me over here! If I imagine myself in Lana's place, it ends up being an extremely satisfying work! Can't wait to see it when it's finished!

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SMH-REDELK In reply to Tatooine92 [2006-08-24 17:16:09 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. I'm glad you like it.

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Ryse [2005-10-01 01:49:30 +0000 UTC]

Ok there is something wrong with hair of this lady ... hmm i donno what ...
But her hand is very good
Either face's are gr8 !
w8ting 4 complite version

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SMH-REDELK In reply to Ryse [2005-10-01 09:18:03 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for commenting.

There is slight problem with the way Lana's braid hangs. It doesn't seem to have any movement to it. Other than that I actually I like way I did her hair. It's Luke's that needs more work. It needs more highlights and shadows I think. And don't get me started on the lower half of their bodies because it's just

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Mindscapes [2005-09-30 22:23:59 +0000 UTC]

Oh, wow! I love this! I don't care that it's a scrap, I'm faving it! Excellent work, as usual!

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SMH-REDELK In reply to Mindscapes [2005-10-01 00:19:45 +0000 UTC]

EGADS WOMAN IT"S NOT EVEN FINISHED YET!!!

You are too much, still you know I love ya! You're so good to me and my scrapy crap. Well okay I admit this one isn't really crap. I'm kind of at a stand still with it because I'm not sure what to do with their hands. I mean Luke's hand (the one you're supposed to see) and Lana's left arm. Since I flipped the drawing from my original sketch I'm a little confused as to how it should look. Got any suggestion cause right now I'm open to anything that will help me finish this piece so I can move it to my gallery.

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Mindscapes In reply to SMH-REDELK [2005-10-01 01:05:12 +0000 UTC]

You're asking a BAD ARTIST how to finish your picture? Man, you really ARE stuck!

I'd say put Luke's hand on her hip, maybe his fingers touching her butt. (You know what I mean! Not grabbing or anything!) As for Lana's left arm, it's not necessary to show it. I assume it's either dangling at her side or she's touching his back.

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SMH-REDELK In reply to Mindscapes [2005-10-01 09:10:32 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the input. I like your suggestion on where to place Luke's hand. I'll have to try to work that in.

Hmmmm. . . I guess I could have two of his fingers there, (he's holding an ax so anymore fingers and byebye ax)

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Mindscapes In reply to SMH-REDELK [2005-10-01 11:54:17 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

I must have missed the axe-holding thing. Then again, he could always have dropped the axe because he was distracted by his feelings for Lana.

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SMH-REDELK In reply to Mindscapes [2005-10-01 17:27:34 +0000 UTC]

OOooooOOOooooo You're good! I like that Luke gets all flustered and drops his axe to hold his heart's secrect desire.

Oh hey I was up late again last night working on putting together a cover picture of Luke, Shemi and Padme' for 'The Dark Lords Duplicity' and it turned out fairly nice at least I'm happy with it I just wish that I had a shot of Musafar in the background instead of Geonosis.

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Mindscapes In reply to SMH-REDELK [2005-10-01 17:56:09 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I know my romance stuff! I'm also in a romance mood. (I'm planning a picture and story that focuses on my favorite Star Wars couple.)

What's "The Dark Lords Duplicity"? Is that a fanfic you're working on? I might be able to get you a Mustafar picture. I'll check out my ROTS books and see if I can find something to scan.

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SMH-REDELK In reply to Mindscapes [2005-10-01 18:18:51 +0000 UTC]

It's the next chapter in Corellian Pledge you silly. I know it;s been a long time since you red it but well there you have it.

I was working in Phototshop for hours cutting and pasting scans of Luke, Shemi and Padme'. I had to place colored auras around them to make them look a little dream-like.

Hey that would be great if you could send me high res. scans of Mustafar. I could put the really background from the dream. I look for hours for good shot of it on the net with no luck. The best pics where too small to look good when enlarged. DANG IT!

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Mindscapes In reply to SMH-REDELK [2005-10-02 02:12:37 +0000 UTC]

Hey, I've scanned three pictures of Mustafar for you. I've completely forgotten your e-mail address, so send me an e-mail and I'll attach the scans to the reply. Two are of a digital matte painting and the third is of a digital production painting. I got them from the "Making of Revenge of the Sith" and "The Art of Revenge of the Sith."

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SMH-REDELK In reply to Mindscapes [2005-10-02 05:30:39 +0000 UTC]

Sweet I love you!!! And how could you lose my email?! I'm crushed (just kidding)

Woman you scared me with that correction on Shmi misspelling. I had to rush back to my story to make sure I spelled it right.

YAY! I DID SPELL IT RIGHT!

A note on the fun side. You said that your B-day is the 26th of October, well guess what, you and one of my close friends share the same birthday with Terell (Keith Urban that is) You lucky things you!

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Mindscapes In reply to SMH-REDELK [2005-10-02 12:04:37 +0000 UTC]

I "lost" it because you stopped e-mailing me, silly! After a certain amount of time, I delete old e-mails. So if you want me to keep it, you have to keep e-mailing me! I don't want my inbox to get too cluttered!

That is so weird about the birthday thing!

So let me know when you want those pictures!

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SMH-REDELK In reply to Mindscapes [2005-10-04 05:13:12 +0000 UTC]

ASAP on the pics. I sent you another email this afternoon so you'll have to let me know if you got it and thanks again.

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Mindscapes In reply to SMH-REDELK [2005-10-04 15:12:33 +0000 UTC]

I just sent them. Remember, I was at Grandma's last night and I'll be there again tonight. (I'm hoping Mom's guest will leave by tomorrow night. I want to sleep in my own bed, dang it!) I can't get on the internet there for some reason. I'm having trouble with my dial-up there. (Thank goodness I have DSL at home!) Let me know when you receive the pictures.

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SMH-REDELK In reply to Mindscapes [2005-10-05 03:05:17 +0000 UTC]

I got them this morning. I'm not sure if I can use them yet though. If they don't look good when enlarge than I won't be able to use them. either way I thank you again for sending them to me. Keep your fingers crossed that it works.

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Mindscapes In reply to SMH-REDELK [2005-10-05 21:27:48 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome and good luck!

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Mindscapes In reply to SMH-REDELK [2005-10-01 20:02:15 +0000 UTC]

Do you mean Shmi instead of Shemi? (Out of control Star Wars fan girls must be sure!)

You know, I actually don't remember your chapters having titles. Maybe I just skipped over the titles and went right into the story! I have a tendency to do that, you know!

I'm still working on my Layla picture, so I will start searching for those pictures as soon as it's done. (I'm having body shape issues. Whenever I draw portaits, I include the shoulders and I can't seem to get them right! Grr!) I've lost your e-mail address, so if you would be so kind, send me a test e-mail and I will reply to that once I have the scans.

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