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Published: 2013-11-17 22:25:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 1083; Favourites: 43; Downloads: 0
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Here's my LAST commission forAn illustration of hisΒ ff of RTOG (AU).
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yes,you're right. uvu
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whoa so what happened?
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I will tell you buy note
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so what did you think?
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what was your faverit part?
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from which?
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the story I told you about that this picture is base on?
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Oh! When Jamie found out the truth about Jack.
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really why is that?
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Because then his parents felt sorry and the whole Bennet family came together to help Jack save the world.
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well if you think that was cool wait until you hear these ideas I cam up with.
I got the idea from second Xmen movie when Jack takes Pitch offer when they shake hands Pitch grabs Jack arms with his other hand and injects jack with his dark magic that it brain washes Jack turns his Blue Coat Black and his Blue Eyes Hazel and turns him into Dark Jack and Pitch just uses him and needs Jack power to make himself strong enough to spread his gift a of fear in the world and he makes Jack do terrible things like freeze and threaten and maybe attack People like when Jamie runs into Dark Jack when sledding Jack grabs Jamie then holds the boy up in the hair or to wall of one of the building then makes this Icesickle appear out of his hand and was about to stab Jamie but then a cop shoot Jack from behind then Jack Coat and his Hazel eyes turns back Blue and he comes back to his scences Jack says Jamie What Is Going On What Am I Doing he drops the icesickle and slowly puts down Jamie and flys of sobbing or crying because he had no idea what he was doing or was in control of his actions.
after Jack gets shot and Pitch spell that was controlling him is broke Jack fly's to the woods and sits on a tree feeling ashamed of what he has done he then looks into his capsule that the Tooth Fairy put the teeth that she collect so she can gain access to the owners memory's Jack looks into his capsule and see his past and how he saved his little Sister and how he became Jack frost and he gets his memory's back to who he was he spends the rest of the day and all night rethinking his life then the next day or the afternoon he hears laughter from below he looks out to see on the lake where he saved his sister and became Jack frost Jack see people skating and playing Hokey on the frozen lake from men to woman and children Jack recognizes two of the children Jamie and Sophie Bennett Jamie and Sophie are holding each other hands and are skating Jack normally levitates in the air above people when they are skating to watch over everyone making sure no one would get hurt on the ice or fall in and drown like he did but that's when he was invisible but since he knows people can see him now levitating in the air above everyone would be a bad idea so he kept his distant and stay in the tree well hidden while Jamie was holding Sophie hand twirling her around Sophie yells Weee and says Faster Big Brother Faster and Jamie says I Will Try Sophie when Jamie try's to go faster but accidently lets go of Sophie hand and she zooms right over to the thin Ice she falls on her chest crying she is not hurt but when she gets up the ice cracks from underneath her and she falls in Jamie yells Sophie Everyone yells a Kid fell Into The Ice Was That Sophie Bennett Oh My God People Gathered around where Sophie fell in look warried sick Sophie pops out yelling help Jamie yells Sophie and is about to run over to her but is held back buy his friends who say Don't Be Crazy Jamie You Will Fall In To and Jamie yells But That's My Sister I Cant Just Watch Her Drown and he is not the only one his parents are there to and they are obviously worried sick and Jamie mom try's to run toward Sophie but is held back buy the crowd and Yells Sophie My Baby and Keeps Yelling Sophie then in few minuts when everthing seem to be lost Jack frost dives in out of nowhere and into the hole where Sophie fell in he dived into the cold water he see Sophie floting unconsions under water he swims toward her and grabs her and in a few minuts or second he comes out of the hole where Sophie fell in and where he dived in and when he comes out of the ice with Sophie snuggled in his arms his hood fly's off and everyone is stunned and shock to see Jack Frost is just a kid because when he was under Pitch spell he kept his hood up so no one saw his face or could tell what he look like and how old he was everyone thought he was a old man but there stunned to see he is just a 15 or 16 or 17 year old boy and when People see his face People say Oh My God Look At His Face He Just A Boy That's Jack Frost I Thought He Be Older A lot Older Me To I Thought He Was Just A Old Man But He Is No Older Then My Son the cops point there guns toward Jack but the chief Calab and Claude father or Pippa father says Lower Your Guns He Holding Sophie Bennett You Might Hite The Girl they lower there guns Jack looks around then gazed at Jamie and his parenst he either walk toward them spreading ice on the lake with his frozen feet or he levitates toward them and hands Sophie to her mother the mother embraces Sophie and sobs over her Sophie cough and gasp for air and cry's and and says in her innocent voice Mommy Jamie says You Saved My Sister Thanks Jack but Why Jack looks at the stunned crowd then he throws his hood over his face and fly's off Jamie yells to come back.
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That is awesome!
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I thought You Would Like It and if you got any ideas of your own feel free to share.
also what was your faverit part.
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Hmmmm I don't really know. I mean the whole plot was cool
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well I am glad you like it then.
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you're welcome.
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great soΒ got any ideas?
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Oh sorry no ideas right now....
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Oh sorry no ideas right now....
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okay then.
do you want to hear what else I have thought of the story?
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No I think I'm good thank you, but your ideas are awesome and you should post them.
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your welcome.
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It's a long story, but for a series of events Jamie and his sister went to the same lake where Jack died many years ago, Sophie fell down and Jack save her in place of Jamie, becouse he didn't want he gonna to die.
For a better explanation ask to
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I guess a explantion is over do.
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yes very well drawn and very good explanations to.
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so are you up for another Request because I know what else you can draw conserning Jack frost?
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No I'm sorry but I'm not going to do any requests enceforth, I don't like it and recently I don't use Deviantart a lot, so.....
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why is that?
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I told you, I don't like to do commissions. I prefer draw for myself and for school.
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okay then nevermind.
but do you want to hear what my idea was?
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well I was wondering if you could draw a AlterNet Universe of Jack Frost Chracter instead of being a teenager he isΒ a 20 orΒ 30 or 40 year old man who saved his eight year old son from drowning but drowned himself and became Jack Frost.
what do you think?
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How many times should i tell you? I DON'T WANNA DO COMMISSIONS! So please, don't beginΒ your sentence with ''I was wondering if you could dra-''NO. PLEASE, DON'T. It's so annoying.
Respect to the story, mmh, it's difficult for me to accept AlternativeUniverse in general and I think this version could be a little boring, maybe because i like jack frost for who he is, because he is for the first thing a forever teenager, a ort of Peter Pan. See, an old jack frost with a child would be mature and the rebellion that feature jack frost's character would cease to exist, i don't wanna see him like it. :c
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here is a idea for something you could draw.
could you draw J.M Barrie the author of Peter Pan sitting on bench in the park trying to find inspiration and guess who he meets or see fly in the air above him but Jack Frost himself Jack either takes a walk in that same park or fly over Mr Barrie and Mr Barrie can see Jack because he believes in fairy tails and either one that inspires Mr Barrie to write Peter Pan which is the point of the drawing.
so could you draw Mr Barrie in in the park or Mr Barrie seeing Jack fly right over him in the park and the name of the drawing could be What if Jack Inspired Peter Pan.Β
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I am sorry I did not mean to annoy you and maybe my grammerΒ was a bite off sorry.
but anyway your right just forget what I said.Β
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your welcome.
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I think I got it. thanks
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thanks to you! (and sorry for my bad english ><)
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its cool and welcome
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well if you want to know the story I can tell you what its about.
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Can you tell me too?? *curious, curious*
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sure I will send you a note.
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Thank you very much!
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