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Published: 2012-09-25 03:49:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 115; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 2
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Your nose brushes mineAnd for a small span of time
I forget the world around me
And get lost in the
Feeling of your arms.
I forget that you're
"Unsure"
I forget that we're
Held back by our fears
I forget it all.
My chest grows light
As if I might
Float into the air
I feel like you care
I feel like life itself.
Like the blasting of a million laserbeams
I am glowing at the seams
An explosion within my chest
But maybe it's best
I keep this to myself
After all, you don't feel the same
As I do when we play this game
The game of my heart
The game we decided to start
Without care of the consequences.
What do I do, dear one?
When all I want is to become
As much of everything to you
As you have managed to do
Within me.
When you feel unsure
And all I feel is pure
Unadulterated affection
Upon reflection
Maybe this is all for the best, after all.
Comments: 23
Inkedshadow [2012-09-25 04:37:57 +0000 UTC]
Poetry<3 I never write it, but it's my favorite to read xP I love it. The emotion shines through, good job c:
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Smoth3rd In reply to Inkedshadow [2012-09-25 04:38:54 +0000 UTC]
You are such a dedicated admirer. Between you and Q-chan, I fear my ego shall be quite fluffed very soon.
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Inkedshadow In reply to Smoth3rd [2012-09-25 04:42:44 +0000 UTC]
LOL, hey, fluffed egos never hurt... xP
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Smoth3rd In reply to Inkedshadow [2012-09-25 04:43:44 +0000 UTC]
I guess not. If the two of you approve, maybe I'll write a lot and get famous or something XD
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Inkedshadow In reply to Smoth3rd [2012-09-25 04:45:52 +0000 UTC]
Just don't forget us little guys when you make it big xP (to quote the cliche line)
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Smoth3rd In reply to Inkedshadow [2012-09-25 04:47:37 +0000 UTC]
I shall send you baskets of your favorite things weekly.
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Inkedshadow In reply to Smoth3rd [2012-09-25 04:49:26 +0000 UTC]
Then it has been settled. None shall be forgotten, and the joyous day continues.
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MistressSlytherin [2012-09-25 03:54:09 +0000 UTC]
Not bad at all. Very heartfelt. I liked the bit of rhyme you threw in every so often, too
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Smoth3rd In reply to MistressSlytherin [2012-09-25 03:56:25 +0000 UTC]
Thank you.
I am working really hard on my pieces of late to make them come from my heart rather than my head.
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MistressSlytherin In reply to Smoth3rd [2012-09-25 04:30:47 +0000 UTC]
That's an excellent way to write, too. The best writing is done from the heart
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Smoth3rd In reply to MistressSlytherin [2012-09-25 04:31:24 +0000 UTC]
:3 I absolutely agree. It seems to be furthering my goals too.
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MythosHero [2012-09-25 03:53:39 +0000 UTC]
Wonderful and beautiful, once again. I'm having feels and they hurt. But in a good way, I think. :3
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Smoth3rd In reply to MythosHero [2012-09-25 03:54:21 +0000 UTC]
How very reassuring, Q-chan.
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MythosHero In reply to Smoth3rd [2012-09-25 03:56:04 +0000 UTC]
>.> I really do admire your writing. I hope you know that.
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Smoth3rd In reply to MythosHero [2012-09-25 03:59:16 +0000 UTC]
I believe you dear.
How those lasers feel, in a picture is: [link]
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MythosHero In reply to Smoth3rd [2012-09-25 04:06:14 +0000 UTC]
Oh, goodness. It's so cute I can hardly stand it. (Again, in a good way)
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Smoth3rd In reply to MythosHero [2012-09-25 04:10:55 +0000 UTC]
Beyond glorious. It feels like God's hand itself is reaching down into my heart and filling it with everything that is pure and amazing.
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MythosHero In reply to Smoth3rd [2012-09-25 04:13:52 +0000 UTC]
Stop, it's so perfect, I can't-- :3
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Smoth3rd In reply to MythosHero [2012-09-25 04:15:31 +0000 UTC]
Just like the person who inspires the feeling.
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