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Published: 2008-11-04 15:14:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 8678; Favourites: 125; Downloads: 70
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Next page: [link]some of you already know, some don't know... i decided to redo the first few comic pages as long as it's not too late, since... the storyline (YAY NOW I GOT A PLOT! and totally need to thank for helping me ^.^ i
ya tally! 
) wouldn't have worked out all so well with the old pages... xDso this is the NEW page 1
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Thank you!
Well, that is the point, isn't it? A fire out of nowhere... I guess you'll have to wait and read on to find out
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wow! i love how you drew this out! it looks amazing
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your very very welcome!
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Woh...That's like one of the coolest things I have every seen!
The fire is awesome!And I love your character! I hope I see more from you soon!
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wow incredible incredible incredible those flames are beautiful good luck in the re-doing of the pages
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Oh wow, This looks much better, you have deffinetly gotten better with your anatomy and perspective. [ignore my horrid spelling plz =w=;;] You started it out very nicely too, the burns in the blanket looked real, and the fire is nicely done also. Lighting, shadeing, colors, lineart, its all great. 
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OMFG HEVENS GIRL 
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awww... you're exaggeratin sweety... XD
stiill ....thank you sooo much!!!
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One piece of advice though... he's laying on a bed, right? But in the 'fire panel' it looks more like straw... You might want to smooth out the highlights a bit more next time
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thanks so much!
hehe yeah i actually did try that but it looked even crappier for some really weird reason XD
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Your welcome
Well, I guess that takes some practice then
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haha yeah probably!
wont have to draw blankets too often anymore anyway... only like in ...one page or so XD
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Hehe, that's good then... you if you are gonna draw humans then the same thing applies for their clothes
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i kno XD but humans dont count as background and therefore they won t be done crappyly XD
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Hehe, that's one way of putting it
Though I read somewhere that to really make your backgrounds beautiful, you shouldn't treat them as backgrounds, but make them a picture in and of themselves... This way of looking at it really inproved mine
Darn, I'm rambling, while I should be sleeping so I'm not completely broken at the exam... I need to get up in five-and-a-half hours
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NO GO SLEEP NOW! 
hehe i know btw, but i got bored cause it didn't work outas i wanted XD
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I went to sleep 
Hehe, yeah, know the feeling
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YAY!
must be a great feeling
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i like how you did the fire and the lighting,
keep up the good work.
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Haunted lamp! AHHHHH!
Great job btw! I like this version a LOT better! ^^
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Awesome! and get working on the comic! I wanna know whats happens!!!
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thanks!
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That is AWESOME!
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