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Published: 2008-06-28 12:13:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 6501; Favourites: 110; Downloads: 188
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REDOING THE COMIC! NEW FIRST PAGE: [link]first page: [link]
previous page: [link]
next page: coming soon! ^.^
done!!!1
tell me about any spelling or grammar mistakes please 
cobalt is ~i-dog s and daichi (the grumpy dog who doesn't intoduce himself yet) is ~Furrama s
hope you guys like it!
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Well Daichi's a bit of a punk isn't he?
FIGHT FIGHT FIGHT!!!!
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Looks awesome! But Daichi's a jerk. o^o
btw, you forgot to capitalize one "I" at "When I woke up, i didn't understand what had happened,"
Looks so good though!!
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aww thank you so much! i'll change that!
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YAY! Awesome! I can already see animosity growing between those dogs ^^
Great work!
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I LOVE this! 
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awww thank you a lot!!!
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Haha, you're very welcome!
I can't wait too see more of this!
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Ooooh its awesome! Defiantly your best page yet!
Oh I noticed something, its not critic its just in the 6th panel you forgot Lunn's (I think thats his name) dots above his eyes, I'm pretty sure its the 6th panel, its the one where he is saying "Hi guys! This here is Shiver!" just wanted to let you know..
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thank you a lot!!!! 
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You're welcome! Ok, sorry I just thought you should know because I thought it was a different dog when I didn't see the eye marks!
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yeah but no need to be sorry
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looks awesome! and hahah i like diachi already! XD and yey for cobalt he looks awesome!!!!!!!!!!!
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THANK YOU SO MUCH HUN!!!
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hahha youre welceom!- hey is the lil jack russelish looking dog josh one ofyour cahracters?
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yes he is 
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I've just read all pages, and - it's interesting story ^^ I'm waiting for next pages =]
You had much work to do it all, but it looks great!
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bad dog! >/.\< leave them alone
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O yes he will >/.\< or he will go to the vet! and *snip snip*
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hahahahahahaha lol now you really made me laugh .... 
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hahahahaha lol now you really made me laugh
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OMG ITS SO CUTE. No I wish I could create a comic and have characters like yours.
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awww thanks!!!!! 
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Oh i know i can't, I'm having a hard time turning Bam Margera into a wolf. *argh racks brain*
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still think you can! if you try hard enough you can do anything!
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I just put a picture up, I was wondering ifyou could take a look at it and tell me what you think. I know the head's small. but I would not fix it
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Cute!!
Only... you forgot Lunn's eye markings on "hy guys" pannel, and I can hardly read, what does it says on the last pannel.
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AWW THANK YOU!! thanks a lot for telling me i totally forgot... 
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Ohh... that's getting cool!!
Only one thing... The letters got so little in the last two ballons it's kinda hard to read them...
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THANK YOU! should be ok to read if you download it
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This page is awesome, Snow! ^_^ Keep up the good work
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